人教版八上英语作文怎么写?
校园之窗 2025年12月14日 09:43:04 99ANYc3cd6
下面我将为你提供一个全面的八年级上册英语作文写作指南,包括写作步骤、常用句型、分单元话题范文以及高分技巧,希望能帮助你取得好成绩!
第一部分:英语作文写作“四步法”
无论写哪个话题,都可以遵循这个清晰的步骤,让你的作文结构完整、条理清晰。

第一步:审题构思 - 动笔前最重要!
- 明确题目要求:看清题目要求写什么,是写人、写事、写计划还是写观点?
- 确定文体和时态:
- 写人/事/物:通常用一般现在时(描述常态)或一般过去时(描述已发生的事)。
- 写计划/打算:用一般将来时 (
be going to/will)。 - 写感受/观点:用一般现在时。
- 列出要点:在草稿纸上用中文或简单英文列出所有要写的关键点,确保不遗漏信息。
第二步:列提纲 - 搭建作文的“骨架” 一个好的提纲能让你的作文逻辑清晰。
- 开头:点明主题,引出下文。(1-2句)
- 主体:分点论述,详细描述,这是作文的核心,可以分2-3段来写,每段围绕一个中心点。(3-5句)
- 总结观点,表达感受或展望。(1-2句)
第三步:初稿写作 - 填充作文的“血肉”
- 翻译要点:将提纲中的要点用简单的英文句子表达出来。
- 串联句子:使用连接词(见下方常用句型)把句子串联成段落,使其流畅自然。
- 注意时态和人称:保持全文时态和人称(第一人称
I/we,第三人称he/she/it/they)的一致性。
第四步:检查修改 - 提升作文的“颜值” 写完后一定要检查!这是拿高分的关键。

- :是否包含了所有要点?是否偏题?
- 检查语法:主谓是否一致?时态是否正确?名词单复数、动词形式是否正确?
- 检查拼写:有没有拼写错误的单词?
- 检查句式:尝试使用一些复合句(如
because,so,but,if)或不同的句式,让文章不那么单调。
第二部分:常用句型和“万能公式”
记住这些“法宝”,写作文时信手拈来。
开头句
I think.../In my opinion...(我认为...)There is a.../There are some...(有...)Do you know...?(你知道吗?)I like...very much.(我非常喜欢...)I am going to talk about...(我将要谈论...)
连接词
- 表示并列/递进:
and,also,too,as well as - 表示转折:
but,however - 表示因果:
because,so,because of - 表示顺序:
First,Second,Third,Finally/At first,Then,Next,At last - 表示举例:
for example,such as
结尾句
In a word, ...(..)All in all, ...(..)I hope...(我希望...)That's all. Thank you!(就说这么多,谢谢!)I like...very much. I hope you can like it, too.(我非常喜欢...,也希望你能喜欢。)
“五句”万能公式
对于简单的作文,可以尝试这个万能结构:
- 主题句:
I like... very much.(我喜欢...) - 原因句1:
First, it is.../Because...(它.../因为...) - 原因句2:
Second, it can make me...(它能让我...) - 举例句:
For example, I often...(我经常...) - 总结句:
In a word, I think it is great.(我认为它很棒。)
第三部分:分单元话题范文
以下是八年级上册各单元常考话题的范文,你可以模仿学习。
Unit 1: Where did you go on vacation? (谈论假期)
假期经历 要求: 假如你叫李华,上个月你和家人去北京度假了,请根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍你的假期。

- 去了北京
- 参观了长城和故宫
- 吃了北京烤鸭
- 感觉很累但很开心
范文: My Summer Vacation
Last month, I had a wonderful vacation with my family in Beijing. We went there by train.
During the vacation, we visited many famous places. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. It was very long and old. I felt very proud when I stood on it. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum. There were many great treasures there. It was amazing!
We also tried some delicious food. Peking Duck was the most famous one. It tasted so good that I wanted to eat it again.
I was very tired after the trip, but I felt very happy. I learned a lot about Chinese history. Beijing is a great city and I hope to visit it again.
Unit 2: How often do you exercise? (谈论日常活动与频率)
我健康的生活方式 要求: 描述你自己的健康生活方式,包括你多久锻炼一次、吃什么、作息习惯等。
范文: My Healthy Lifestyle
I think I have a very healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you about it.
I exercise every day. I usually run for half an hour in the morning and play basketball with my friends after school. I also exercise three times a week in the gym. I feel strong and energetic.
As for food, I try to eat a lot of vegetables and fruit. I like apples, bananas, and carrots. I drink milk every day. But I don't like junk food, like hamburgers or ice cream. I only eat them once a month.
I also have good habits. I sleep for about eight hours every night. I usually go to bed at 10 p.m. and get up at 6 a.m. I think good sleep is very important for students.
In conclusion, a healthy lifestyle helps me study better. I will keep these good habits.
Unit 3: I'm more outgoing than my sister. (比较人物)
我最好的朋友 要求: 描述你最好的朋友,并比较你们两个人在外貌、性格、爱好等方面的异同。
范文: My Best Friend
My best friend is Tom. We have been friends for three years. We are both in Class Two, Grade Eight. Although we have some similarities, we are also very different in some ways.
First, we look different. I am taller than him, but he is stronger. I have short straight hair, while he has long curly hair. We both wear glasses.
Second, our personalities are not the same. I am more outgoing and active. I like to talk and make new friends. Tom is quieter and more serious. He is also more hard-working than me. He always gets better grades in exams.
However, we have the same hobbies. We both like playing soccer and listening to music. We often play soccer together after school and enjoy the same kind of music, such as pop music.
In a word, Tom is a good friend. I am happy to have him as my friend. We learn from each other.
Unit 4: What's the best movie theater? (谈论喜好与理由)
我最喜欢的电影 要求: 说说你最喜欢的电影是什么,为什么喜欢它(比如情节、演员、音乐等),以及你通常和谁一起去看。
范文: My Favorite Movie
My favorite movie is Titanic. It is a wonderful and moving story.
I like it for several reasons. First, the story is very touching. It's about a poor boy named Jack and a rich girl named Rose. They fall in love on the ship Titanic. Although the ship sinks at the end, their love is forever. Second, the music in the movie is beautiful. The song "My Heart Will Go On" is famous all over the world. Every time I hear it, I feel sad but moved.
I usually watch this movie with my parents. We often watch it on weekends. My mom always cries when we watch the sinking scene.
I think Titanic is not just a love story, but also a story about courage and hope. I have watched it three times, but I still love it.
Unit 8: How do you make a banana milk shake? (写过程/说明文)
如何制作水果沙拉 要求: 根据提示,写一篇说明文,介绍制作水果沙拉的步骤。
- 需要的食材:苹果、香蕉、酸奶、蜂蜜
- 步骤:洗、切、混合、加酸奶和蜂蜜
范文: How to Make Fruit Salad
Do you like fruit salad? It's easy and healthy. Let me tell you how to make it.
First, you need to get ready the ingredients. You need one apple, two bananas, a cup of yogurt and some honey.
Next, wash the apple carefully. Then, peel the banana and cut it into small pieces. Cut the apple into small pieces, too.
After that, put all the fruit pieces into a big bowl. Mix them up well.
Finally, pour the yogurt over the fruit and add some honey. Mix them again.
Now, a delicious fruit salad is ready! You can enjoy it with your family. It's really sweet and fresh. Try it!
第四部分:高分技巧总结
- 字迹工整,卷面整洁:这是第一印象,非常重要!
- 句子有长有短:不要全是简单句,可以尝试用
and,but,so,because,if等连接词,或者使用There be句型、It's + adj. + for sb. to do sth.等句式。 - 善用高级词汇:在掌握基础词汇后,可以适当替换一些简单词。
like->enjoy,love,be fond ofgood->great,wonderful,fantastic,excellenthappy->glad,pleased,excited
- 结构清晰,分段合理:开头、主体、结尾分明,主体部分最好有2-3段,每段一个中心思想。
- 紧扣主题,不跑题都要为你的中心思想服务。
希望这份详细的指南能对你有所帮助!多读、多背、多练是提高英语写作水平的唯一捷径,加油!