中考英语作文PPT怎么用？

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决胜中考英语作文

从结构到高分，一步到位！**

核心要求:
- 内容完整: 紧扣主题,要点齐全。
- 语言准确: 语法正确,用词恰当。
- 结构清晰: 逻辑连贯,层次分明。
- 表达得体: 语域恰当,符合书面语规范。
评分标准 (通常分四档):
- 第一档 (13-15分): 内容完整，语言准确，结构清晰,表达流畅。
- 第二档 (9-12分): 内容基本完整，语言有少量错误,结构较清晰。
- 第三档 (5-8分): 内容不完整，语言错误较多,结构有些混乱。
- 第四档 (0-4分): 内容不相关，语言混乱,无法阅读。
图片: 一个清晰的评分标准表格或金字塔图。

总起：凤头 (开头) - 精彩，引人入胜
- 作用: 开门见山，点明主旨,引出下文。
- 方法:
  - 背景引入法: "With the development of society..."
  - 问题提出法: "Nowadays, a growing number of students are addicted to mobile phones."
  - 观点陈述法: "In my opinion, reading is the best way to gain knowledge."
展开：猪肚 (主体) - 丰满，论据充分
- 作用: 承上启下，用具体例子、原因、细节来支撑观点。
- 方法: 通常用2-3个段落，每段一个中心句。
  - Firstly, ...
  - Secondly, ...
  - For example, ...
  - As far as I'm concerned, ...
豹尾 ( - 有力，回味无穷
- 作用: 总结全文，重申观点,提出建议或展望未来。
- 方法:
  - 总结观点法: "In conclusion, we should learn to manage our time effectively."
  - 提出建议法: "Therefore, it's high time that we took action to protect the environment."
  - 升华主题法: "Only in this way can we build a better future for ourselves."
图示: 一个清晰的“三段式”结构图，标注出凤头、猪肚、豹尾。

告别 "Good" 和 "Bad":
- Good -> excellent, wonderful, fantastic, outstanding, beneficial
- Bad -> terrible, awful, harmful, negative, disadvantageous
告别 "Like" 和 "Say":
- Like -> enjoy, be fond of, be interested in, prefer...to...
- Say -> think, believe, argue, insist, point out
让动词更生动:
- make -> create, produce, develop, cause
- get -> obtain, gain, achieve, receive
连接词，让你的文章更流畅:
- 表并列: and, also, as well as, not only...but also...
- 表转折: but, however, yet, although, while
- 表因果: because, because of, since, as, therefore, so, thus
- 表顺序: first, second, finally, at last, in the first place
图片: 一个对比鲜明的词汇升级图。

开头万能句:
- It is well-known that... (众所周知...)
- There is no denying that... (不可否认...)
- Recently, the issue of... has been brought into public focus. (..问题已成为公众关注的焦点。)
主体万能句:
- There are several reasons for this phenomenon. (这一现象有几点原因。)
- The first reason is that... (第一个原因是...)
- Besides / In addition / What's more,... (..)
- For instance / For example,... (..)
- Taking all these factors into account, we can safely come to the conclusion that... (考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以得出结论...)
结尾万能句:
- In a word, ... (..)
- From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that... (我们可以得出...)
- Only by doing so can we... (只有通过这样做，我们才能...)
提示: 将句型与幻灯片4的结构结合起来使用,效果更佳。

题目: 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你如何保持健康，请你给他写一封回信,给出你的建议。
审题要点:
- 文体: 书面信件 (应用文)
- 对象: Peter (朋友,用词可稍随意但需正式)
- 主题: 如何保持健康
- 给出具体建议 (饮食、运动、作息等)
思路构建:
- 开头: 回应来信，表明收到,引出主题。
- 主体: 分点给出建议 (e.g., eat more fruit and vegetables, do exercise every day, get enough sleep)。
- 表达希望,祝愿对方健康。
图示: 一个简单的思维导图,列出建议的几个方面。

Dear Peter,
- (开头: Thank you for your letter. I'm glad to hear from you. You asked me for some advice on how to keep healthy. Here are some of my suggestions.)
First of all, a healthy diet is very important. You should eat more vegetables and fruits instead of too much junk food. Drinking enough water every day is also necessary.
- (主体第一段: 中心句 + 具体建议)
Secondly, doing regular exercise is another key to good health. You don't have to do heavy exercise. Taking a walk for 30 minutes after dinner or playing ball games with friends can be very helpful.
- (主体第二段: 中心句 + 具体例子)
Last but not least, getting enough sleep is essential. Teenagers like us should sleep for at least 8 hours a night. A good rest can help us study better the next day.
- (主体第三段: 中心句 + 解释)
I hope my advice will be of some help to you. Keeping a good habit is the secret to staying healthy.
- ( + 祝福)
Best wishes,
- Li Hua
批注: 在旁边用不同颜色标注出好的开头、连接词、高分词汇和句型。

“中式英语” (Chinglish):
- 错误: I very like English.
- 正确: I like English very much. / I am fond of English.
语法错误:
- 时态错误: (特别注意一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时)
- 主谓不一致: He like apples. -> He likes apples.
- 缺少冠词/介词: I go to school. (缺少the) -> I go to the school.
拼写错误:
- important (not "improtant"), believe (not "beleive")
书写潦草:
- 提示: 卷面整洁非常重要！字迹清晰，大小适中,段落分明。
内容空洞:
- 提示: 不要只说大道理,一定要用具体的例子或细节来支撑你的观点。

核心要点回顾:
- 结构: 三段式是王道！
- 语言: 词汇升级,句型多样。
- 观点明确,论据充分。
- 细节: 语法、拼写、书写,一个都不能少！
金句总结:
- "Practice makes perfect!" (熟能生巧！)
- "Good structure is the foundation of a good essay." (好的结构是优秀作文的基础。)
Q&A 环节
图片: 一张“加油”或“胜利”的激励图片。