九年级上册英语第三单元作文怎么写?
作文示例 2025年11月29日 22:01:50 99ANYc3cd6
这里我将为你提供一个全面的写作指南,包括:
- 审题与构思
- 核心词汇与短语
- 高分句型模板
- 三篇不同水平的范文(优秀范文、标准范文、基础范文)
- 写作技巧与注意事项
审题与构思
常见作文题目类型:

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自我介绍型
My Good/Bad Habits(我的好/坏习惯)How to Keep Healthy(如何保持健康)My Lifestyle(我的生活方式)
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建议信型
A Letter of Advice to a Friend(给朋友的建议信)How to Improve Our Study Habits(如何改善我们的学习习惯)
构思步骤(以 "My Good Habits" 为例):
- 开头: 点明主题,介绍自己有好习惯。
"I am a teenager with many good habits, which help me stay healthy and happy."
(图片来源网络,侵删) - 主体 (分点论述):
- 饮食习惯。 我吃什么?不吃什么?为什么好?
"First, I have a healthy eating habit. I eat a lot of vegetables and fruits every day. They are rich in vitamins, which is good for my health. I try to eat less junk food like hamburgers and candy because they are unhealthy."
- 运动习惯。 我做什么运动?多久一次?有什么好处?
"Second, I exercise regularly. I usually play basketball with my friends after school for about an hour. It not only helps me relax from study stress but also keeps me strong."
- 学习/阅读习惯。 我怎么学习?为什么重要?
"Third, I have a good habit of reading. I spend half an hour reading English books or novels every evening. Reading widens my knowledge and improves my language skills."
- 饮食习惯。 我吃什么?不吃什么?为什么好?
- 总结好习惯带来的好处,并表达坚持的决心。
"In conclusion, these good habits make my life colorful and meaningful. I will keep them and try to form more good habits in the future."
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核心词汇与短语
习惯类:
- habit (n.) 习惯
- lifestyle (n.) 生活方式
- routine (n.) 日常作息
- custom (n.) 风俗,习惯
- form a habit (养成习惯)
- get into the habit of... (开始有...的习惯)
- break a bad habit (改掉坏习惯)
好习惯:
- healthy eating habits (健康的饮食习惯)
- exercise regularly (定期锻炼)
- get enough sleep (睡眠充足)
- read every day (每天阅读)
- be punctual (守时)
- help with housework (做家务)
- keep a diary (写日记)
坏习惯:
- stay up late (熬夜)
- eat too much junk food (吃太多垃圾食品)
- be lazy / be inactive (懒惰/不活跃)
- forget things (健忘)
- be addicted to... (沉迷于...)
- spend too much time on... (在...上花太多时间)
建议类:
- advice (n.) 建议
- suggest (v.) 建议
- It's a good idea to... (做...是个好主意)
- You should... (你应该...)
- You'd better... (你最好...)
- Why not...? (为什么不...呢?)
- I think it would be better if... (我认为如果...会更好)
结果/好处类:
- as a result (结果)
- therefore (
- so (
- which is good for... (这对...有好处)
- it helps me... (它帮助我...)
- it keeps me... (它使我保持...)
- it improves my... (它提高了我的...)
高分句型模板
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动名词作主语:
Doing sports every day is very important for us.(每天做运动对我们来说非常重要。)Reading books can open a new world to us.(读书能为我们打开一个新世界。)
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"Not only... but also..." 句型:
Exercising not only strengthens our bodies but also relaxes our minds.(锻炼不仅强健我们的体魄,也放松我们的身心。)
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定语从句:
I have a friend who is very fond of playing the piano.(我有一个非常喜欢弹钢琴的朋友。)This is the book that my teacher recommended to me.(就是老师推荐给我的那本书。)
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"The more... the more..." 句型:
The more you exercise, the healthier you will be.(你锻炼得越多,你就会越健康。)
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It's + adj. + for sb. + to do sth.:
It's necessary for students to have a good study plan.(有一个好的学习计划是必要的。)
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"I suggest/advise that..." (虚拟语气):
I suggest that you (should) go to bed early tonight.(我建议你今晚早点睡。)
范文示例
优秀范文
My Good Habits**
As a ninth-grade student, I believe that good habits are the key to a successful and healthy life. I'm proud to say that I have formed several good habits that benefit me a lot.
Firstly, I have a balanced diet. For breakfast, I always have some milk and eggs to get enough energy. I eat plenty of fresh vegetables and fruits at lunch and dinner. I rarely eat junk food because it's high in sugar and fat, which is bad for my health. Secondly, I never stay up late. I make sure I get at least eight hours of sleep every night. This helps me stay energetic and focused in class the next day. Thirdly, I have a habit of reading. I spend about half an hour reading English or Chinese novels before going to sleep. Reading not only enriches my knowledge but also improves my writing skills.
In conclusion, these good habits have become an important part of my life. They keep me healthy and help me study better. I will stick to them and try to develop more good habits in the future.
标准范文
How to Keep Healthy**
Health is very important for everyone, especially for students. Here are some simple ways to keep healthy.
First, we should have a good eating habit. We need to eat more vegetables and fruits every day. They are good for our bodies. At the same time, we should eat less fast food like hamburgers and French fries. Second, doing exercise is necessary. We can run, play basketball, or just take a walk after school. Exercising can make us strong and relaxed. Third, we must get enough sleep. It's not good to stay up late to watch TV or play computer games. A good rest helps us study better.
If we follow these advice, we will be healthier and happier. Let's start building good habits now!
基础范文
My Lifestyle**
I am a middle school student. I have a simple lifestyle.
In the morning, I get up early and have breakfast. I usually eat bread and milk. I go to school by bike. At school, I listen to teachers carefully and finish my homework on time. After school, I sometimes play basketball with my classmates. It's very fun. In the evening, I have dinner with my family. Then I do my homework and read some books. I go to bed at 10 o'clock.
I think my lifestyle is healthy. I like it.
写作技巧与注意事项
- 时态统一: 描述自己的习惯或事实,通常用一般现在时。
- 人称明确: 根据题目要求,确定使用第一人称
I/my(我/我的),第二人称you/your(你/你的),还是第三人称he/his/she/their(他/他的/她/他们的)。 - 结构清晰: 采用“总-分-总”的结构,即开头点题,中间分点论述,结尾总结,使用
First, Second, Third或For one thing, For another等连接词,让文章更有条理。 - 内容具体: 不要只说 "I have good habits.",要具体说明是什么习惯,以及它为什么好,把 "I like reading" 具体化为 "I spend half an hour reading English novels every evening, which helps me improve my vocabulary."
- 善用连接词: 使用 `and, but, so,