八年级上册英语作文如何写高分？
作文示例 2025年12月17日 23:04:06 99ANYc3cd6
介绍我的朋友
这是八年级最经典的作文题目之一,主要考察人物的描写和形容词的运用。
写作思路
- 开头: 直接点明你要介绍的朋友是谁，以及你们的关系（e.g., "My best friend is Li Ming." / "I want to tell you about my good friend, Wang Fang."）。
- 主体段落 (分点描述):
- 外貌: 描述他/她的长相、身高、发型等。
- 性格: 描述他/她是一个什么样的人，比如友好、乐于助人、开朗、幽默等。
- 兴趣爱好: 他/她喜欢做什么运动、看什么书、听什么音乐等。
- 具体事例: 讲一件能体现他/她性格特点或你们友谊的小故事,让人物更生动。
- 总结你为什么欣赏他/她，以及他/她对你意味着什么（e.g., "He/She is a great friend and I'm lucky to have him/her."）。
范文: My Best Friend
My best friend is Tom. He is my classmate and we have known each other for three years.
Tom is a tall and handsome boy with short black hair. He always wears a smile on his face, which makes him look very friendly. In terms of personality, Tom is very outgoing and helpful. Whenever I have problems with my math homework, he is always patient enough to explain the solutions to me step by step. He is also very humorous; he often tells funny jokes and makes everyone laugh.
Our hobbies are quite similar. We both enjoy playing basketball after school. On weekends, we sometimes go to the library to read books or watch science fiction movies together. I still remember the time when I failed an important exam and felt very sad. Tom didn't just say "cheer up". He spent the whole afternoon with me, encouraging me and helping me find my confidence.
Tom is not only a good friend but also a role model for me. He teaches me the importance of being kind and hardworking. I am really proud to have him as my best friend.
核心词汇与句型
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核心词汇:
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核心句型:
My best friend is...我最好的朋友是...He/She is...他/她是...He/She has... hair.他/她有...头发。He/She always wears a smile on his/her face.他/她脸上总是带着微笑。He/She is very...他/她非常...Whenever I have problems, he/she always...每当我遇到问题时，他/她总是...I still remember the time when...我仍然记得...的时候。He/She is not only a... but also a...他/她不仅是一个...，而且是一个...I am proud to have him/her as my friend.我很荣幸有他/她做我的朋友。
我的周末计划
这篇作文主要考察一般将来时 (will / be going to) 和对日常活动的组织描述能力。
写作思路
- 开头: 简单说明周末即将到来，并表达你的期待（e.g., "This weekend is coming. I'm so excited because I have a great plan."）。
- 主体段落 (分时间/活动描述):
- 周六上午/下午: 你打算做什么？(e.g., clean my room, go to the library, have piano lessons)。
- 周六晚上: 有什么安排？(e.g., watch a movie with my family, chat with friends online)。
- 周日上午/下午: 继续描述计划。
- 周日晚上: 为新的一周做准备 (e.g., prepare for school, go to bed early)。
- 总结你的周末计划，并表达希望周末过得愉快的心情（e.g., "I believe I will have a meaningful and relaxing weekend."）。
范文: My Weekend Plan
This weekend is coming, and I am already looking forward to it. I have made a detailed plan to make it both relaxing and productive.
On Saturday morning, I am going to get up early and clean my room. It's a bit messy after a busy week, so I think it's a good time to tidy it up. In the afternoon, I plan to go to the library to borrow some storybooks. I love reading, and it's a perfect way to spend a quiet afternoon. In the evening, my family and I will watch a funny movie together. I think it will be a great time to bond with them.
On Sunday, I will focus on my studies. I am going to finish my math and English homework first. After that, I want to review the lessons for the next week to make sure I understand everything well. In the afternoon, I will go for a walk in the park near my home to get some fresh air and exercise. It's important to stay healthy. Before I go to bed, I will prepare my schoolbag for Monday.
I am sure this weekend will be wonderful. It will be a good balance between work and rest. I can't wait!
核心词汇与句型
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核心词汇:
plan计划relaxing放松的productive有成效的tidy up整理borrow借review复习bond增进感情get some fresh air呼吸新鲜空气exercise锻炼prepare准备balance平衡
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核心句型:
This weekend is coming.这个周末就要来了。I am going to.../I will...我将要...I plan to...我计划...First, / Second, / Finally...//..It's a good time to...是做...的好时机。I believe/ think/ hope...我相信/认为/希望...It's important to...做...很重要。
写作小贴士
- 三段式结构: 这是英语作文最经典的结构：引言 - 主体 - 结论，清晰明了,不容易跑题。
- 善用连接词: 使用
First,Second,Besides,However,Therefore等词汇,可以让你的文章逻辑更连贯。 - 句子长短结合: 不要总是用 "I am..." "He is..." 开头的简单句，可以尝试用
Although...,Because...,When...等引导的从句,让句子更丰富。 - 检查语法: 写完后，一定要检查时态、主谓一致、单复数等基本语法错误,这是得高分的基础。
- 背诵范文: 不用逐字背诵，但要理解范文的框架和高级词汇/句型，然后尝试用自己的话和经历去模仿和创造。 对你有帮助！祝你写作顺利！
