人教版英语八年级作文
作文示例 2025年12月14日 18:59:21 99ANYc3cd6
八年级英语作文核心要求
与七年级相比,八年级作文更强调以下几点:
- 内容更丰富:不再是简单描述一两句话,而是需要围绕一个主题,从多个方面展开,有开头、主体和结尾。
- 句式更多样:要尝试使用复合句(如
that,if,because引导的从句)、so...that...、not only...but also...等句型,避免通篇都是简单句。 - 逻辑更清晰:段落之间、句子之间要有恰当的连接词,让文章读起来流畅自然。
- 词汇更高级:在正确的基础上,适当使用一些课本上学过的重点词汇和短语,能让你的作文“增色不少”。
常考作文话题及写作思路
人教版八年级的作文话题通常围绕学生的日常生活展开,以下是几个最常见的话题类型:

话题1:人物介绍
- 常见题目:介绍你的朋友、家人、老师或你崇拜的人。
- 写作思路(三段式):
- 第一段(总起):介绍人物是谁,和你的关系,以及他/她最突出的特点或你对他的总体评价。
My best friend is Li Ming. / I would like to introduce my English teacher, Mr. Wang.
- 第二段(分述):这是文章的主体,用2-3个具体事例来支撑你的观点,可以从外貌、性格、爱好、优点等方面来写。
- 外貌:
He is of medium height with short straight hair. - 性格:
He is very kind and helpful. / He is humorous and always makes us laugh. - 爱好/优点:
He is good at playing basketball. / He is willing to help others when they are in trouble.
- 外貌:
- 第三段(:总结你对这个人的感情,或他/她对你的影响。
I am proud to have such a good friend. / He is not only a good teacher but also a good friend to us.
- 第一段(总起):介绍人物是谁,和你的关系,以及他/她最突出的特点或你对他的总体评价。
话题2:校园生活
- 常见题目:描述一次难忘的学校活动(运动会、艺术节、郊游等)、你的校园生活、你的学校等。
- 写作思路(三段式):
- 第一段(总起):点明事件(活动)和时间,以及你对这次活动的总体感受。
Last Friday, our school held a sports meeting. / I had an unforgettable time during the school trip to the mountains.
- 第二段(分述):详细描述活动的过程,这是最重要的部分,要写出“做了什么”、“看到了什么”、“感觉如何”。
- 时间顺序:
In the morning, we... In the afternoon, we... - 具体细节:
I took part in the 100-meter race and won the third prize. / We had a picnic by the lake and sang songs together. - 感受:
I was so excited that I couldn't sleep well that night.
- 时间顺序:
- 第三段(:总结这次活动的意义或你从中得到的收获。
This activity was not only fun but also taught us the importance of teamwork. / I learned a lot from this trip and will cherish the memory forever.
- 第一段(总起):点明事件(活动)和时间,以及你对这次活动的总体感受。
话题3:计划与安排
- 常见题目:描述你的周末/假期计划、你的新年计划、一次旅行计划等。
- 写作思路(三段式):
- 第一段(总起):说明你要计划的是什么事情,以及计划的目的。
I am going to have a busy but meaningful weekend. / Here is my plan for the coming summer vacation.
- 第二段(分述):用
First, Second, Finally或First of all, Then, After that, Finally等连接词,清晰地列出你的计划,注意使用be going to do或will do。First, I am going to finish my homework on Saturday morning.Then, in the afternoon, I will visit my grandparents with my parents.Finally, on Sunday, I plan to read some interesting books.
- 第三段(:表达你对未来的期待。
I believe I will have a great time. / I am sure this vacation will be relaxing and helpful.
- 第一段(总起):说明你要计划的是什么事情,以及计划的目的。
话题4:观点与建议
- 常见题目:是否应该……”、“如何……”的议论文,如“是否应该带手机到学校”、“如何保持健康”、“如何学好英语”等。
- 写作思路(三段式):
- 第一段(总起):明确表明你的观点或建议。
In my opinion, we shouldn't be allowed to take mobile phones to school. / Here are some tips on how to learn English well.
- 第二段(分述):给出2-3个理由来支持你的观点,或分点列出建议。
- 理由:
First, mobile phones will distract us from our study. Second, ... - 建议:
First, you should listen to the teacher carefully in class. Second, reading English every day is very helpful. Third, ...
- 理由:
- 第三段(:重申你的观点,或发出呼吁。
So, let's say no to mobile phones at school. / I hope these suggestions will be useful to you.
- 第一段(总起):明确表明你的观点或建议。
高分写作技巧(万能钥匙)
- 审题要准:圈出题目中的关键词,确定文体(记叙文、说明文等)和人称(第一人称
I/We,第三人称He/She/They)。 - 列提纲:动笔前,花2分钟在草稿纸上写下三段式的大致内容,避免写到一半跑题或没东西写。
- 句式多样化:
- 简单句 + 复合句:
I like reading books. Books can open up a new world for me.→I like reading books because they can open up a new world for me. - 使用高级连接词:
- 表并列/递进:
and, but, so, not only...but also..., both...and... - 表转折:
but, however - 表因果:
because, so, because of - 表顺序:
first, then, next, finally, at first, at last
- 表并列/递进:
- 简单句 + 复合句:
- 善用课本短语和句型:这是最简单也最有效的方法。
be interested in(对...感兴趣)take part in(参加)be proud of(为...自豪)It's + adj. + for sb. to do sth.(对某人来说做某事是...)spend time (in) doing sth./spend money on sth.(花时间/金钱做某事)
- 检查,检查,再检查!:写完后一定要留出时间检查,这是得高分的最后一步。
- 拼写错误:
friend不要写成frend。 - 语法错误:主谓一致 (
He like→He likes)、时态错误。 - 标点符号:注意句号、逗号的使用。
- 拼写错误:
范文示例(以“介绍我的朋友”为例)
** 请根据以下提示,写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友李华。
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李华是我的好朋友,我们同班。
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他个子很高,戴着一副眼镜,看起来很酷。
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他不仅学习好,而且乐于助人,当我有数学难题时,他总是耐心地帮助我。
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他喜欢打篮球,是校篮球队的一员。
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我很自豪能有这样的朋友。
范文:
My Good Friend

I have a good friend named Li Hua. We are in the same class. He is one of my best friends.
Li Hua is a tall boy with a pair of glasses. He looks very cool. He is not only excellent in his studies but also very helpful. Whenever I have trouble with my math problems, he always explains them to me patiently until I understand. Besides, he is a big fan of basketball. He is a member of our school basketball team and often plays with his classmates after school.
I am very proud to have a friend like Li Hua. I hope our friendship will last forever.
作文常用句型/短语库
你可以把这些“砖头”积累起来,写作时自由组合。
- 开头
I have a friend/classmate...Let me tell you something about...I would like to introduce...
- 描述外貌
He/She is of medium height/build.He/She has short/long straight/curly hair.He/She is wearing a red T-shirt today.
- 描述性格
He/She is kind/friendly/helpful/humorous/brave.He/She is always ready to help others.Sometimes he/she is a little shy.
- 描述爱好
He/She enjoys playing basketball/reading/listening to music.His/Her hobby is collecting stamps.In his/her spare time, he/she often...
I like him/her very much.He/She is my good friend and I'm proud of him/her.I hope we will be friends forever.
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