2025陕西英语作文怎么写？
作文示例 2025年12月12日 20:07:26 99ANYc3cd6
这篇作文是陕西自主命题的最后一届高考英语作文（从2025年起陕西使用全国卷），因此具有其独特的风格和特点，它属于典型的“图画/图表+观点阐述”类作文，考察学生的观察能力、逻辑思辨能力和语言表达能力。
原题呈现
（满分25分）
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。
A group of frogs were traveling through the woods, and unfortunately, two of them fell into a pit. All the other frogs gathered around the pit. When they saw how deep the pit was, they told the two frogs that they were as good as dead.
The two frogs ignored the comments and tried to jump out of the pit with all their might. The other frogs kept telling them to stop, that they were as good as dead. Finally, one of the frogs gave up and jumped. He fell to his death.
The other frog continued to jump as hard as he could. Once again, the crowd of frogs shouted at him to stop and just die. He jumped even harder and finally made it out. When he got out, the other frogs said, "Didn't you hear us?"
The frog explained to them that he was deaf. He thought they were encouraging him the whole time.
This story tells us that... In our daily life, we should...
题目分析
- 文体类型：这是一个“故事续写”类作文，题目给出了一个完整的故事，并要求考生根据故事的核心寓意，续写两个段落，这比单纯的看图作文或命题作文更考验学生的阅读理解、归纳总结和发散思维能力。
- 故事寓意：故事的核心寓意非常清晰。
- 正面寓意：信念、坚持、积极心态的力量，那只“聋”的青蛙因为听不到负面评价，所以内心充满“鼓励”，最终凭借顽强的毅力获得了成功。
- 反面寓意：消极、负面、打击性言论的危害，其他的青蛙因为只看到了困难和不可能，不断地传递负面信息，最终导致了其中一只青蛙的死亡。
- 写作要求：
- 第一段：
This story tells us that...要求考生提炼并阐述故事的中心思想，你需要总结出故事告诉我们一个什么道理。 - 第二段：
In our daily life, we should...要求考生联系实际，提出具体的做法或建议，你需要将故事中的道理应用到现实生活中，告诉我们应该怎么做。
- 第一段：
写作思路与范文
第一段：提炼寓意
- 核心思路：点明故事的核心是“信念”与“环境”的对比，青蛙的成功不在于它是否真的“聋”，而在于它心中始终保持着积极的信念，而忽略了外界的负面干扰，我们应该强调信念、心态和坚持的重要性。
- belief, faith, positive attitude, persistence, determination, negative influence, environment。
- 句式结构：可以先总述寓意，再分点解释（比如信念的力量和消极环境的危害）。
范文示例 (第一段):
This story tells us that the power of belief and a positive attitude is far more crucial than the negative comments from the outside world. The successful frog, though physically deaf, was mentally "deaf" to pessimism. His unshakable faith in his own ability to escape, which he mistook for the crowd's encouragement, gave him the strength to persist until he succeeded. In contrast, the other frogs, blinded by the apparent difficulty of the situation, became a source of negativity that ultimately led one of their companions to despair. Therefore, it is our inner conviction that shapes our destiny, not the discouraging words of others.
中文翻译与解析： 这个故事告诉我们，信念和积极心态的力量远比外界的消极评论更为重要，那只成功的青蛙，虽然耳朵是聋的，但在精神上对悲观主义“充耳不闻”，他对自己能够逃脱的坚定信念——被他误认为是同伴们的鼓励——给了他坚持下去直到成功的力量，相比之下，其他的青蛙被眼前的困难所蒙蔽，成为了负能量的来源，最终导致其中一只同伴绝望，决定我们命运的，是我们内心的信念，而不是他人的泄气话。
第二段：联系实际
- 核心思路：将故事中的道理应用到学习、生活、工作等具体场景中，可以提出我们应该如何培养积极心态，如何应对负面评价，以及如何成为一个鼓励他人的人。
- apply to, study, life, challenges, setbacks, encourage, be optimistic, focus on goals。
- 句式结构：可以从个人层面（我们应该如何做）和对他人的层面（我们应该如何对待他人）来展开。
范文示例 (第二段):
In our daily life, we should cultivate a strong will and a positive mindset to overcome the inevitable challenges and setbacks we encounter. When facing difficulties, whether in our studies, careers, or personal relationships, we must learn to filter out negative voices and focus on our goals, just like the deaf frog. Instead of being discouraged by criticism, we should interpret it as motivation to prove our capabilities. Furthermore, we should also be mindful of our own words and actions, striving to be an encourager rather than a critic to those around us. By doing so, we not only help others find their strength but also contribute to a more positive and supportive environment for everyone.
中文翻译与解析： 在我们的日常生活中，我们应该培养坚强的意志和积极的心态，以克服我们必然会遇到的挑战和挫折，当我们面临困难时，无论是在学习、工作还是人际关系中，我们都必须学会过滤掉负面的声音，专注于我们的目标，就像那只聋了的青蛙一样，我们不应被批评所泄气，而应将其视为证明自己能力的动力，我们还应注意自己的言行，努力成为身边人的鼓励者，而非批评者，通过这样做，我们不仅帮助他人找到他们的力量，也为所有人贡献了一个更加积极和有支持力的环境。
高分要点总结
- 审题准确：准确理解了“提炼寓意”和“联系实际”两个不同的写作任务。
- 寓意深刻：没有停留在“要相信自己”的表面，而是深入分析了“信念”与“环境”的相互作用，体现了思辨能力。
- 结构清晰：两段话分工明确，第一段“是什么”（寓意），第二段“怎么做”（应用），逻辑清晰。
- 语言地道：
- 使用了高级词汇和短语：
unshakable faith,pessimism,inevitable challenges,filter out negative voices,contribute to a supportive environment。 - 运用了多样的句式：使用了
not only... but also...,whether... or...等复合句，以及分词短语作状语等，使文章富于变化。
- 使用了高级词汇和短语：
- 内容充实：第二段没有空喊口号，而是具体指出了在学习、生活和人际交往中如何应用故事哲理，内容饱满，有说服力。
希望这份详细的解析和范文能对你有所帮助！
