2025云南英语作文考什么?
作文示例 2025年12月10日 09:19:17 99ANYc3cd6
2025年云南高考英语作文题目回顾
假设你是李华,你们学校正在组织一次“走进中国文化”的主题活动,请你代表班级用英语写一封邮件,邀请一位外教(Mr. Smith)参加,邮件需包含以下内容:
- 写信目的: 邀请他参加“走进中国文化”主题活动。
- 介绍活动的主要内容,如观看中国传统艺术表演(如京剧、民乐演奏、书法展示等)和体验中国茶艺。
- 活动意义/你的期待: 说明你希望他参加的原因,以及期待从他那里得到什么(如建议和分享)。
注意:

- 词数100左右。
- 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
- 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
开头: Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua from Class Three. I'm writing to invite you to our school activity...
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua

题目分析与写作思路
这是一封典型的邀请信,写作的核心在于清晰、礼貌地传达邀请信息,并让对方感到被重视和期待。
写作思路:
- 开头(已给出): 直接点明身份和写信目的。
I'm writing to invite you to...是非常标准的邀请信开头。 - 主体段落(第一点 & 第二点):
- 引出活动: 简要介绍活动名称“'Into Chinese Culture' themed activity”。
- 详细介绍活动内容: 这是邮件的核心部分,题目给出了两个主要方向:观看表演 和 体验茶艺,不要只罗列,要用生动的语言描述。
- 表演部分: 可以选择1-2个具体例子,如京剧、民乐、书法,用一些形容词来增加吸引力,如
fascinating,captivating,traditional。 - 茶艺部分: 强调“体验”(experience),而不仅仅是看,可以描述成
a wonderful chance to learn about and experience Chinese tea culture。
- 表演部分: 可以选择1-2个具体例子,如京剧、民乐、书法,用一些形容词来增加吸引力,如
- 主体段落(第三点):
- 阐述意义和表达期待: 这是体现你情商和写作水平的地方,为什么希望他参加?
- 对活动的好处: 他的参与会让活动更成功 (make the event more successful/meaningful)。
- 对你的好处: 你可以从他的视角获得宝贵的反馈和建议 (valuable feedback and suggestions)。
- 对文化交流的好处: 这是一次很好的文化交流机会 (a great opportunity for cultural exchange)。
- 阐述意义和表达期待: 这是体现你情商和写作水平的地方,为什么希望他参加?
- 已给出): 表达期待回复的意愿,并使用标准的署名。
范文参考
以下提供三个不同水平的范文,供你参考和对比。
范文1:基础版 (符合要求,表达清晰)
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am Li Hua from Class Three. I'm writing to invite you to our school's "Into Chinese Culture" themed activity.
The activity will be held next Friday afternoon. There will be two main parts. First, we will watch some traditional Chinese performances, like Peking Opera and folk music concerts. Second, you will have a chance to experience Chinese tea art, which is a very special part of our culture.
We would be very happy if you could come. Your presence will surely make the event more successful. We are also looking forward to your valuable suggestions.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
范文2:进阶版 (语言更丰富,衔接更自然)
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua from Class Three. I'm writing on behalf of my class to cordially invite you to our upcoming "Into Chinese Culture" themed activity.
The event is scheduled for next Friday afternoon and promises to be a fascinating journey into our traditions. It will feature two highlights. Firstly, we will present a series of captivating traditional performances, including the elegant art of Chinese calligraphy display and melodious folk music concerts. Secondly, we have arranged a special session for you to experience the art of Chinese tea ceremony, a wonderful opportunity to learn about its history and significance.
We believe your participation would be a great honor for us. It would not only make the activity more lively but also provide us with a precious chance to learn from your perspective. We are eager to hear your insights and feedback.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
范文3:高分版 (词汇高级,句式多样,有感染力)
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua from Class Three. I am writing to extend a heartfelt invitation to you to join us for our "Into Chinese Culture" themed activity, which we believe will be both enriching and enjoyable.
Taking place next Friday afternoon, the activity is designed to offer you a vivid glimpse into the heart of Chinese civilization. The program is twofold. Initially, you will be treated to a showcase of our most cherished traditional arts, from the dramatic splendor of Peking Opera to the serene beauty of a Guzheng concert. Following this, we cordially invite you to participate in an interactive Chinese tea ceremony, where you can first-hand appreciate the harmony and philosophy embedded in this ancient practice.
Your presence would mean the world to us, as it would undoubtedly elevate the event to a new level. More importantly, we are incredibly keen to gain your unique perspective as a cultural outsider. Your feedback and suggestions would be invaluable to us, fostering a deeper and more meaningful cultural exchange.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
亮点词汇与句型解析
| 类别 | 基础版 | 进阶版 | 高分版 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 邀请类 | invite you to | cordially invite you to | extend a heartfelt invitation to you to |
| 活动 | activity | themed activity, upcoming event | themed activity, enriching and enjoyable event |
| main parts | highlights, two main parts | program is twofold, initially, following this | |
| 观看 | watch | present, feature | be treated to a showcase of, be exposed to |
| 京剧 | Peking Opera | Peking Opera | the dramatic splendor of Peking Opera |
| 民乐 | folk music | melodious folk music | melodious folk music, Guzheng concert |
| 书法 | (未提及) | the elegant art of Chinese calligraphy display | (未提及,但用了更概括的arts) |
| 茶艺 | tea art | tea ceremony | the art of Chinese tea ceremony, interactive session |
| 期待 | look forward to your suggestions | eager to hear your insights and feedback | incredibly keen to gain your unique perspective, invaluable feedback |
| 句式 | There will be... / We will... | It will feature... / We have arranged... | The program is twofold. / Initially... / Following this... |
| 衔接 | (简单连接) | which is... / Secondly... | which we believe... / More importantly... |
备考建议
- 背诵模板,而非全文: 记住邀请信、感谢信、建议信等不同应用文的基本框架和常用句型,开头如何写,结尾如何收,中间段落如何组织。
- 积累主题词汇: 针对常见话题(如中国文化、环境保护、科技发展、校园生活等)建立自己的词汇库,比如提到中国文化,就要想到
kung fu,calligraphy,paper-cutting,Silk Road,Confucius等词汇。 - 练习句式多样性: 不要总是用
I think...,We should...,尝试使用不同的句式,如:- 分词结构:
Watching the performance, we were deeply impressed.(看完表演,我们深受感动。) - With复合结构:
With your help, the activity will be a great success.(有了你的帮助,活动一定会很成功。) - It作形式主语:
It is a great honor for us to invite you.(邀请您是我们的荣幸。)
- 分词结构:
- 善用连接词: 使用
Firstly,Secondly,Besides,Moreover,However,Therefore等连接词,使文章逻辑清晰,过渡自然。 - 注意细节: 仔细审题,确保所有要求点都覆盖到,注意格式(如邮件的开头结尾、称呼、署名)和词数控制,写完后务必检查语法和拼写错误。
希望这份详细的解析对你有帮助!祝你取得好成绩!