2025山东英语作文考什么题型？
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作文题目回顾
2025年山东高考英语作文
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter来信想了解你家乡的变化，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括以下几点：
- 环境的变化： 过去河水污染严重，现在河水变清了，河边建成了公园。
- 生活的变化： 人们的生活水平提高了，购物方式多样化（如网上购物）。
- 你的感受： 对家乡的变化感到高兴，并邀请他有机会来做客。
注意：
- 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
- 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
- 参考词汇：污染 (pollution), 水平 (standard of living), 网上购物 (online shopping)。
开头已给出： Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I'm so glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown. Let me tell you about them.
结尾已给出： I'm really happy about these great changes. Welcome to my hometown and have a look with your own eyes!
Yours, Li Hua
写作思路与要点分析
这是一篇典型的“情景介绍+变化描述+个人感受”的书信体作文，写作时，我们需要紧扣题目给出的三个要点，并使用恰当的时态和连接词，使文章结构清晰、语言流畅。
审题与构思
- 文体： 书信体，注意格式，如开头的 "Dear Peter," 和结尾的 "Yours, Li Hua"。
- 人称： 第一人称 "I"。
- 时态：
- 描述过去的情况,使用 一般过去时。
- 描述现在的变化,使用 一般现在时。
- 表达个人感受和邀请,使用 一般现在时。
- 结构：
- 开头（已给）： 回应来信，引出话题。
- 主体段落： 分点阐述环境、生活两大变化。
- 已给）： 表达感受，发出邀请。
要点展开与词汇句型储备
环境的变化
- 过去： 河水污染严重。
- 词汇：
polluted river,serious water pollution,dirty,smelly。 - 句型：
In the past, the river running through our town was seriously polluted./The river used to be polluted by nearby factories./People said the river was so dirty that we couldn't even see the fish in it.
- 词汇：
- 河水变清，建成公园。
- 词汇：
clean,clear,beautiful park,walk along the river,take morning walks,children play。 - 句型：
However, great changes have taken place./Now, the government has taken measures to improve the environment./The river has become much cleaner and we can see fish swimming in it./A beautiful park has been built along the river, where people can relax and take morning walks.
- 词汇：
生活的变化
- 过去： 生活水平不高，购物方式单一（可能去实体店）。
- 词汇：
low standard of living,not very convenient,go to the local market。 - 句型：
People's standard of living was not very high in the past./Shopping was not as convenient as it is now.
- 词汇：
- 生活水平提高，购物方式多样化（网上购物）。
- 词汇：
improve,rise,diversified,online shopping,Taobao,JD.com,click the mouse,deliver to your door。 - 句型：
Now, people's standard of living has improved a lot./We have more choices when shopping./For example, online shopping has become very popular./We can just stay at home, click the mouse, and buy almost everything we need, which will be delivered to our door soon.
- 词汇：
你的感受与邀请
- 感受： 高兴、自豪。
- 词汇：
happy,proud,amazing,exciting。 - 句型：
I am really happy/proud to see these great changes./It's amazing to see how fast my hometown is developing.
- 词汇：
- 邀请： 机会来做客。
- 词汇：
welcome,visit,have a look,show you around。 - 句型：
You are always welcome to visit my hometown./I'd like to show you around when you come./I'm sure you'll be impressed by the changes too.
- 词汇：
范文示例
以下提供两篇不同风格的范文,一篇简洁明了，一篇稍作润色，供大家参考。
范文一 (简洁清晰版)
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I'm so glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown. Let me tell you about them.
Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the river in our town was polluted by nearby factories and it smelled terrible. But the government has cleaned it up, and now we can see fish swimming in the clear water. A beautiful park has been built along the river, which is a great place for people to relax. People's living standard has also improved a lot. Shopping is much more convenient now. We can buy almost everything we need online, just by clicking the mouse at home.
I'm really happy about these great changes. Welcome to my hometown and have a look with your own eyes!
Yours, Li Hua
范文二 (丰富表达版)
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I'm so glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown. Let me tell you about them.
My hometown has become a modern and beautiful place to live. The biggest change is in the environment. The river running through the town used to be seriously polluted by nearby factories. It was so dirty that we could hardly see the bottom. However, the government took measures to solve the problem. Now, the river has been cleaned up and is crystal clear. A wonderful park has been constructed along the riverbank, where local residents enjoy taking morning walks and children love to play.
People's lifestyles have also changed a lot. Our standard of living is much higher than before. Shopping is more diverse and convenient. Online shopping, for example, has gained great popularity. We can now buy books, clothes, or even daily necessities just by staying at home and ordering online.
I am truly proud of the amazing progress it has made. I'm sure you'll be surprised by the changes. Welcome to my hometown and I'd be happy to show you around!
Yours, Li Hua
写作技巧与亮点总结
- 结构清晰，要点全面： 两篇范文都严格按照题目要求的三个要点展开，没有遗漏信息。
- 时态运用准确： 熟练运用了一般过去时描述过去，一般现在时描述现在和感受，这是此类作文的关键。
- 连接词使用恰当：
- 表示转折：
However,But - 表示递进/补充：
For example,Also,Moreover - 表示结果/
So,Therefore这些连接词让文章逻辑更连贯。
- 表示转折：
- 词汇和句式多样化：
- 词汇： 避免重复使用 "change" 和 "good"，范文二中使用了
modern,beautiful,seriously polluted,crystal clear,wonderful park,diverse,convenient,gained great popularity等更丰富的词汇。 - 句式： 避免全是简单句，范文二中使用了
The river... used to be...,It was so... that...,A wonderful park has been constructed...等复合句和被动语态，提升了文章的档次。
- 词汇： 避免重复使用 "change" 和 "good"，范文二中使用了
- 情感真挚： 结尾的
I am truly proud of...和I'd be happy to show you around等表达，让文章不仅仅是信息的传递，更包含了真挚的情感。
希望这份详细的解析能帮助你更好地理解和掌握这类“描述变化”的英语作文写法！
