初三上册英语作文怎么写？

作文示例 2025年12月14日 06:06:46 99ANYc3cd6 1 0

下面我将为你提供一份全面的初三上册英语作文指南,包括：

写作核心要点
常考话题分类及范文
高分词汇和句型
写作步骤与技巧

写作核心要点（评分标准）

拿到一篇作文，老师通常会从以下几个方面打分,你也要以此为标准来要求自己：

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内容完整: 是否涵盖了题目要求的所有要点？有没有遗漏信息？
结构清晰: 文章是否有明确的开头、主体和结尾？段落之间过渡是否自然？
语言准确: 语法、拼写、标点是否正确？用词是否恰当？
语言丰富: 是否使用了多样的句型（如复合句、倒装句）和一些高级词汇？
卷面整洁: 字迹是否工整？排版是否清晰？

一句话总结： 要点全 + 结构清 + 语法对 + 词汇好 = 高分作文！

常考话题分类及范文

初三上学期的作文话题通常围绕学生的日常生活、学习、品德修养和个人成长,以下是几大类高频话题及范文。

个人经历与感受

这类作文通常要求写一次难忘的经历、一次成功或失败的经历，或是一次有意义的旅行。示例：** An Unforgettable Experience (一次难忘的经历)

范文：

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An Unforgettable Experience

Everyone has unforgettable experiences in their life, and so do I. Among all the memories, the one that impressed me most is my first time giving a speech in English.

It happened last year in our school's English Speaking Competition. At first, I was so nervous that my hands were sweating and my heart was beating fast. I even thought about giving up. But when I saw my classmates encouraging me with smiles, I took a deep breath and told myself, "You can do it!"

Finally, it was my turn. I walked onto the stage, looked at the audience, and began my speech. To my surprise, I gradually calmed down and spoke more fluently than I had practiced. When I finished, the audience burst into applause. I didn't win the first prize, but I felt proud of myself because I had overcome my fear.

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This experience taught me a valuable lesson: Where there is a will, there is a way. It was truly unforgettable.

人物介绍

介绍自己的家人、朋友、老师，或是你敬佩的名人。示例：** My Hero (我的英雄)

范文：

My Hero

When we talk about heroes, many people may think of famous actors or great athletes. However, in my heart, my real hero is my father.

My father is an ordinary engineer, but he is the greatest man I have ever known. He works hard from morning till night just to provide a better life for our family. What I admire most about him is his perseverance and kindness. No matter how difficult the situation is, he never complains. He always faces challenges with a positive attitude.

He also teaches me a lot. He often tells me, "A man is not old as long as he is seeking something." His words have become my motto and have encouraged me to study hard and never give up on my dreams.

My father may not be a hero with superpowers, but he is my true hero. I love him forever.

学校生活与学习

描述你的学校、你的好朋友、一次难忘的校园活动，或是你的学习方法。示例：** My Best Friend (我最好的朋友)

范文：

My Best Friend

I am lucky to have a best friend named Li Hua. We have been in the same class for three years, and he has become an important part of my life.

Li Hua is a boy of medium height with a warm smile. He is not only kind and helpful but also very humorous. He always makes me laugh when I feel down. What I value most in our friendship is that we can share everything with each other. We help each other with our studies. When I have math problems, he explains them to me patiently. When he is upset, I listen to him and try to comfort him.

Last month, when I was sick and missed a week of school, he went to my home to help me with the missed lessons. His kindness moved me deeply.

A good friend is like a mirror. Li Hua is such a friend. I am truly grateful for having him in my life.

环境保护与建议

讨论环境问题，并提出自己的建议，这是中考的热点话题。示例：** How to Protect the Environment (如何保护环境)

范文：

How to Protect the Environment

Nowadays, environmental pollution is becoming an increasingly serious problem. The air is dirty, the rivers are polluted, and the waste is everywhere. It's high time for us to take action to protect our planet.

As middle school students, what can we do to help? In my opinion, we can start with small things. First, we should develop the habit of sorting garbage. We should put different kinds of trash into different bins. Second, we should save as much energy as possible. For example, remember to turn off the lights when leaving a room. Third, we should use public transportation more often to reduce air pollution.

In addition, we can also plant more trees and flowers to make our environment more beautiful. Protecting the environment is not just a slogan; it's our responsibility. Let's take action right now and make our world a better place to live.

未来规划与梦想

谈论你的梦想、未来的职业规划，或是对未来的期望。示例：** My Dream (我的梦想)

范文：

My Dream

Everyone has their own dreams. They are like the stars in the night sky, guiding us forward. My dream is to become a doctor in the future.

I want to be a doctor because I want to help people. When I see patients suffering from illnesses, I feel sad and hope I can do something to relieve their pain. Doctors are like angels who bring health and hope to people. I admire them very much.

To achieve my dream, I know I must work hard from now on. I need to study science subjects well, especially biology and chemistry. I also need to learn to be patient and responsible. It's a long and challenging road, but I am determined to follow my dream.

I believe that as long as I keep trying, my dream will come true one day.

高分词汇和句型储备

想让你的作文“亮”起来，就要学会用“高级”的表达。

高分词汇替换

普通词汇	高分词汇
good -> great -> excellent -> outstanding	卓越的
happy -> glad -> pleased -> delighted	愉悦的
important -> significant -> vital	重要的
many -> a lot of -> numerous -> countless	许多的
think -> believe -> consider -> argue	认为
like -> enjoy -> be fond of -> be keen on	喜欢的
help -> assist -> support -> aid	帮助
big -> large -> huge -> enormous	巨大的
beautiful -> pretty -> attractive -> gorgeous	美丽的

万能高分句型

开头句:

As we all know,... / It is well known that... (众所周知...)
Nowadays, ... has become a hot topic. (...已成为一个热门话题。)
There is no denying that... (不可否认的是...)
It goes without saying that... (不言而喻...)

过渡句:

First of all, / Firstly, ... (..)
What's more, / Moreover, / In addition, ... (此外...)
However, / On the contrary, ... (相反...)
As a result, / Therefore, / Thus, ... (所以...)
For example, / For instance, ... (..)

结尾句:

In conclusion, / To sum up, ... (..)
From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that... (我们可以得出结论...)
Only in this way can we... (只有这样我们才能...)
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration. (希望我的建议能被采纳。)

高级句式:

It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. (对某人来说做某事是...)
- It is very important for us to protect the environment.
Not only... but also... (不仅.....)
- He is not only a good student but also a helpful friend.
The reason why... is that... (...的原因是...)
- The reason why I study hard is that I want to enter a good high school.
... as long as ... (只要...就...)
- You will succeed as long as you keep trying.
倒装句 (部分倒装):
- Never have I seen such a beautiful picture. (我从未见过这么美的画。)
- Not only does he sing well, but he also dances well. (他不仅歌唱得好，舞也跳得好。)

写作步骤与技巧

审题 - 1分钟
- 仔细阅读题目要求,圈出关键词。
- 确定文章的体裁（记叙文、说明文、议论文）和主题。
- 列出所有必须包含的要点,确保一个都不能少。
列提纲 - 2分钟
- 不要急着动笔！用简单的中文或英文关键词列出文章结构。
- 开头: 如何引入话题？
- 主体: 分点阐述,每个要点用一句话概括。
- 如何总结观点或表达感受？
- 写“My Best Friend”
  - 开头：介绍我的朋友是谁,我们认识多久了。
  - 主体1：他的外貌和性格特点（幽默、善良）。
  - 主体2：我们如何互相帮助（学习上、生活上）。
  - 主体3：举一个具体事例说明我们的友谊。
  - 表达我对这份友谊的珍惜和感激。
写作 - 20分钟
- 按照提纲,用完整的句子和段落来写作。
- 注意时态： 记叙文多用一般过去时；介绍人物、事物多用一般现在时；提建议多用一般现在时或情态动词。
- 注意连接词： 让文章逻辑更连贯。
- 有意识地使用 刚才学过的高分词汇和句型，但不要为了用而用,确保用得准确。
检查 - 5分钟
- 检查要点： 是否所有题目要求的内容都写全了？
- 检查语法： 主谓一致、时态、单复数、冠词、介词等是否正确？
- 检查拼写： 有没有写错的单词？
- 检查标点： 标点符号是否规范？
- 通读一遍： 感觉一下文章是否通顺、自然。