2025四川英语作文考什么？
作文示例 2025年12月12日 07:47:18 99ANYc3cd6
2025年四川高考英语作文题目
** 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你家乡近几年的变化，请你给他写一封回信,内容包括以下几个方面：
- 环境变化： 河水变清了,天空更蓝了。
- 交通发展： 更多地铁线路开通,交通更便捷。
- 生活变化： 人们更关注健康,喜欢去健身房或户外运动。
注意：
- 词数100左右。
- 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
- 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
开头： Dear Peter,
How nice to hear from you! I'm glad to tell you about the great changes in my hometown in recent years.
I'm looking forward to your coming to visit my hometown soon.
Yours, Li Hua
审题与写作思路分析
这是一封典型的建议信/告知信，要求向朋友介绍家乡的变化，题目给出了三个明确的核心要点，写作时必须全部覆盖,并且可以适当增加细节。
写作思路：
- 开篇： 题目已经给出了开头，直接使用即可,它起到了引出话题的作用。
- 主体段落： 这是文章的核心，由于有三个要点，最清晰的结构是分点阐述，即每一段集中写一个方面的变化。
- 第一段：环境变化
- 核心句： The environment has improved a lot.
- 细节展开：
- 河水变清： 可以对比过去和现在，In the past, the river running through the city was polluted by nearby factories. The water was dirty and even smelly. But the government took measures to solve the problem. Now, we can see fish swimming in the clear water.
- 天空更蓝： 同样可以对比，The sky is much bluer than before. We often see white clouds floating in the sky. The air is fresher, which makes people feel more comfortable.
- 第二段：交通发展
- 核心句： The transportation has become much more convenient.
- 细节展开：
- 地铁线路： Several new subway lines have been built. They connect different parts of the city efficiently.
- 交通便捷： People can travel around the city more quickly and easily. This saves a lot of time and makes people's lives more convenient. You can take the subway to almost any famous place.
- 第三段：生活变化
- 核心句： People's lifestyles have also changed.
- 细节展开：
- 关注健康： People are more concerned about their health than before.
- 健身房： More and more young people and even middle-aged people go to the gym to work out after work or on weekends.
- 户外运动： Others prefer doing outdoor activities, like running in the park, climbing mountains, or riding bicycles. It has become a new trend.
- 第一段：环境变化
- 题目已经给出了结尾，直接使用，它起到了总结和发出邀请的作用,使信件完整友好。
高分范文
Dear Peter,
How nice to hear from you! I'm glad to tell you about the great changes in my hometown in recent years.
First of all, the environment has improved a lot. In the past, the river running through the city was polluted by nearby factories and the water was dirty. But the government took measures to solve the problem. Now, we can see fish swimming in the clear water. What's more, the sky is much bluer than before, and the air is fresher.
Secondly, the transportation has become much more convenient. Several new subway lines have been built, connecting different parts of the city efficiently. Now, people can travel around the city more quickly and easily, which saves a lot of time.
Finally, people's lifestyles have also changed. People are more concerned about their health than before. More and more young people and even middle-aged people go to the gym to work out after work or on weekends. Others prefer doing outdoor activities, like running in the park or climbing mountains. It has become a new trend.
I'm looking forward to your coming to visit my hometown soon.
Yours, Li Hua
范文亮点解析
- 结构清晰： 严格按照“总-分-总”的结构，主体部分用
First of all,Secondly,Finally等过渡词连接，逻辑层次分明,阅卷老师一目了然。 - 词汇丰富且准确：
- 使用了
improved,convenient,concerned,efficiently,trend等词汇,避免了简单重复。 - 使用了
What's more来补充环境变化,使段落内容更饱满。
- 使用了
- 句式多样：
- 简单句：
Now, we can see fish swimming in the clear water.清晰明了。 - 并列句：
Several new subway lines have been built, connecting different parts of the city efficiently.使用现在分词作结果状语,使句子更紧凑。 - 复合句：
People are more concerned about their health than before.(比较状语从句)Others prefer doing outdoor activities, like running in the park or climbing mountains.(举例说明)。
- 简单句：
- 内容充实： 在题目给出的要点基础上，增加了“过去vs现在”的对比 (
In the past... But now...) 和具体的例子 (fish swimming,running in the park, climbing mountains)，使文章内容不空洞,有血有肉。 - 语言地道： 使用了
How nice to hear from you!,I'm glad to tell you...,I'm looking forward to your coming...等地道的书信开头和结尾,符合英语书信的写作习惯。
备考建议
针对这类“介绍变化”类的作文题,可以从以下几个方面进行准备：
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积累常用话题词汇和句型：
- 环境： pollution, be polluted by, clean up, take measures, fresh air, blue sky, a better environment.
- 交通： transportation, convenient, subway/underground line, build, connect, efficient, save time, traffic jam.
- 生活： lifestyle, change, be concerned about, health, go to the gym, work out, do outdoor activities, take up a new hobby.
- 句型：
- 描述变化：
... has changed a lot./There have been great changes in... - 对比过去和现在：
In the past, ... But now.../... used to be ..., but now it has become... - 表达观点：
I think.../In my opinion.../As far as I'm concerned...
- 描述变化：
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学习清晰的篇章结构：
- 掌握“总-分-总”结构。
- 学会使用
First(ly),Second(ly),Third(ly),Finally,In addition,What's more,However等过渡词,让文章逻辑流畅。
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多练习仿写和背诵：
- 找一些优秀的范文，分析其结构和亮点,然后进行仿写。
- 背诵一些高质量的段落和万能句型,考试时才能灵活运用。
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注意审题和格式：
- 动笔前仔细阅读题目要求,确保所有要点都覆盖到。
- 注意书信的格式，如开头、署名等，题目已给出部分时,直接使用即可。
希望这份详细的解析对你有帮助！祝你取得好成绩！
