七年级英语五单元作文如何写?
作文示例 2025年12月9日 16:09:33 99ANYc3cd6
写作思路与结构
是“My Favorite Food”(我最喜欢的食物)还是“A Healthy Meal”(一顿健康的饭菜),都可以遵循“总-分-总”的结构来写。
开头 (Introduction - 总)

- 开门见山: 直接点明主题,你要写什么食物,或者你认为什么是健康的饮食。
- 给出原因: 简要说明你为什么喜欢它,或者为什么健康饮食很重要。
主体 (Body - 分) 这是作文的核心部分,需要分点、分段详细描述,可以包含2-3个段落:
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第一段:描述食物本身
- 外观: 看起来怎么样?颜色、形状、摆盘等。
- 味道: 尝起来怎么样?是甜的、咸的、酸的、辣的,还是多种味道结合?
- 口感: 是脆的、软的、有嚼劲的,还是滑的?
- 包含的食材: 用了哪些主要材料?(如: tomatoes, eggs, rice, noodles, beef, chicken...)
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第二段:描述与食物相关的故事或感受
- 谁做的: 通常是谁为你做的这道菜?(妈妈、奶奶、爸爸)
- 何时何地吃: 在什么场合下吃?是家庭聚餐、生日派对,还是平常的晚餐?
- 为什么喜欢: 这道菜对你有什么特殊意义?是童年的味道,还是家的感觉?
- 制作过程 (可选): 简单描述一下制作步骤,让文章更生动。( First, ... Then, ... Finally, ...)
(Conclusion - 总)

- 总结观点: 再次强调你对这道菜的喜爱之情,或重申健康饮食的重要性。
- 表达情感: 可以表达一种怀念、感激或推荐的愿望。
常用词汇与短语
食物名称
- 主食: rice (米饭), noodles (面条), bread (面包), dumplings (饺子), pizza (披萨), hamburger (汉堡)
- 肉类: chicken (鸡肉), beef (牛肉), pork (猪肉), fish (鱼), egg (鸡蛋)
- 蔬菜: tomato (西红柿), potato (土豆), carrot (胡萝卜), cabbage (卷心菜), broccoli (西兰花)
- 水果: apple (苹果), banana (香蕉), orange (橙子), strawberry (草莓)
- 饮料: milk (牛奶), juice (果汁), water (水), tea (茶)
描述味道的形容词
- delicious / tasty / yummy (美味的)
- sweet (甜的)
- salty (咸的)
- sour (酸的)
- spicy / hot (辣的)
- fresh (新鲜的)
- crispy (脆的)
- soft (软的)
- juicy (多汁的)
描述动作的动词
- eat (吃), have (吃), taste (尝起来)
- cook (烹饪), make (制作)
- like (喜欢), love (热爱), enjoy (享受)
- add (添加), mix (混合)
- boil (煮), fry (煎), steam (蒸)
其他常用短语
- my favorite food (我最喜欢的食物)
- a kind of... (一种...)
- be good for... (对...有好处)
- junk food (垃圾食品)
- healthy food (健康食品)
- for breakfast/lunch/dinner (作为早/午/晚餐)
- on weekends (在周末)
- It's a good idea to... (...是个好主意)
万能句型
开头句
- My favorite food is... / I like... best. (我最喜欢的食物是...)
- There is a kind of food that I really love. (有一种食物我非常喜爱。)
- I think it's very important to eat healthy food. (我认为吃健康的食物非常重要。)
主体句
- It looks... (它看起来...)
- It tastes... (它尝起来...)
- It's made of... / It contains... (它是由...制成的/包含...)
- My mother often cooks it for me. (我妈妈经常为我做它。)
- I usually eat it on weekends / with my family. (我通常在周末/和家人一起吃它。)
- First, we need to... Then, we... Finally, we... (我们需要...我们...我们...)
结尾句
- I really love it because it's not only delicious but also makes me feel happy. (我真的很爱它,因为它不仅美味,还让我感到快乐。)
- That's why... is always my first choice. (这就是为什么...总是我的首选。)
- I hope you can try it one day. (我希望有一天你能尝尝。)
- Let's eat more healthy food and keep healthy! (让我们多吃健康食物,保持健康!)
范文示例
My Favorite Food (我最喜欢的食物)
My Favorite Food - Dumplings**
My favorite food is dumplings. They are not only delicious but also very special to me.
Dumplings look like small boats. They have a thin flour skin and are filled with different kinds of delicious fillings, such as pork, beef, or vegetables. I like the pork and cabbage dumplings best. They taste salty and a little bit juicy. When I bite into one, the warm and savory filling fills my mouth, which is wonderful.
My mother is very good at making dumplings. On weekends, our family often gets together to make dumplings. We chat and laugh while we are working. My mom rolls the dough, and my dad and I put the fillings in and fold them into beautiful shapes. The most exciting part is eating them! After boiling, the dumplings become plump and ready to eat. We usually dip them in soy sauce and vinegar. It's a great time for our family.
I love dumplings because they are tasty and they bring my family closer together. They are the taste of home and love.
高分技巧
- 善用形容词: 不要只说 "It's good.",尝试用更多生动的词,如 "delicious", "tasty", "crispy", "flavorful"。
- 连接词: 使用 "First, Second, Finally" (其次,, "And", "But", "So", "Because" 等连接词,让你的文章逻辑更清晰。
- 细节描写: 描述食物时,不仅要说味道,还要说外观、颜色、口感,甚至是你吃它时的心情和周围的环境。
- 保持时态一致: 描述一个事实或喜好时,通常用一般现在时,如果描述过去发生的事情(比如昨天妈妈做的饭),则用一般过去时。
- 检查语法: 写完后,一定要仔细检查拼写、主谓一致、单复数等基本语法错误。
希望这份指南能对你有所帮助!祝你下笔如神,取得好成绩!