高考英语作文高分句型

高分句型结构 (The "Sentence Structures" Arsenal)

这些句型能让你的文章摆脱 "主谓宾" 的简单结构，展现出更强的语言驾驭能力。

"倒装句" - 开头惊艳，强调有力

倒装句能迅速抓住阅卷老师的眼球,让你的开头或结尾更有气势。

• 完全倒装 (把副词/介词短语提前)

  • 句型: In/On/At... + 谓语 + 主语
  • 普通句: A beautiful lake lies ahead of us.
  • 高分句: Ahead of us lies a beautiful lake. (在我们前方，是一个美丽的湖泊。)
  • 普通句: The sun rose from the east.
  • 高分句: From the east rose the sun. (太阳从东方升起。)

• 部分倒装 (把助动词/情态动词/be动词提前)

  • 句型: Never/Seldom/Not only/Not until... + 助动词 + 主语 + 谓语...
  • 普通句: I have never seen such a beautiful scene.
  • 高分句: Never have I seen such a beautiful scene. (我从未见过如此美丽的景象。)
  • 普通句: He not only learned the knowledge but also made many friends.
  • 高分句: Not only did he learn the knowledge, but he also made many friends. (他不仅学到了知识，还交到了很多朋友。)
  • 普通句: I realized the importance of time until I failed the exam.
  • 高分句: Not until I failed the exam did I realize the importance of time. (直到我考试失败，我才意识到时间的重要性。)

"强调句" - 突出重点，增强语气

It is/was ... that ... 是最经典、最万能的强调句。

• 句型: It is/was + 被强调部分 + that + 句子剩余部分
• 普通句: My mother encouraged me to study hard.
• 高分句:
  • 强调人: It was my mother that encouraged me to study hard. (鼓励我努力学习的是我的母亲。)
  • 强调事: It was to study hard that my mother encouraged me. (我母亲鼓励我做的事情是努力学习。)
  • 强调时间: It was yesterday that my mother encouraged me to study hard. (我的母亲是在昨天鼓励我努力学习的。)

"非谓语动词" - 简洁高级，逻辑清晰

使用分词短语和不定式短语作状语,可以让句子结构更紧凑，显得更地道。

• 现在分词 作状语 (表示主动或伴随)

  • 普通句: The sun was shining. We walked along the river.
  • 高分句: Walking along the river, we felt very relaxed. (当我们沿着河边散步时，感到非常放松。)
  • 普通句: He realized his mistake. He hung his head in shame.
  • 高分句: Realizing his mistake, he hung his head in shame. (意识到自己的错误后，他羞愧地低下了头。)

• 过去分词 作状语 (表示被动或完成)

  • 普通句: Because he was encouraged by his teacher, he worked harder.
  • 高分句: Encouraged by his teacher, he worked harder. (在老师的鼓励下，他更加努力了。)
  • 普通句: If it is given enough water, the tree will grow well.
  • 高分句: Given enough water, the tree will grow well. (如果给予足够的水，这棵树就会长得很好。)

• 不定式 作状语 (表示目的、结果等)

  • 普通句: He got up early. He wanted to catch the first bus.
  • 高分句: To catch the first bus, he got up early. (为了赶上第一班公交车，他早早起床了。)
  • 普通句: He was too excited to say a word.
  • 高分句: So excited was he that he couldn't say a word. (他是如此激动以至于一句话也说不出来。)

"名词性从句" - 逻辑严谨，表达观点

让句子的主干变得更“厚重”，适合表达观点、原因、结果等。

• 主语从句

  • 句型: What/That/Whether... + 谓语...
  • 普通句: We should protect the environment. This is very important.
  • 高分句: What we should do is to protect the environment. (我们应该做的是保护环境。)

• 宾语从句

  • 句型: 主语 + 谓语 + that/whether/what...
  • 普通句: I believe the environment will be better.
  • 高分句: I firmly believe that with our efforts, the environment will be better. (我坚信，在我们的努力下，环境会变得更好。)

• 表语从句

  • 句型: 主语 + 系动词 + that/why/how...
  • 普通句: The reason is simple. We should protect our planet.
  • 高分句: The reason is that we have only one planet to live on. (原因是我们只有一个赖以生存的星球。)

"定语从句" - 信息丰富，连接自然

用一个句子去修饰一个名词,让你的描述更具体、更生动。

• 句型: 名词/代词 + 关系词 + 从句
• 普通句: The book is very interesting. I bought it yesterday.
• 高分句: The book that I bought yesterday is very interesting. (我昨天买的那本书非常有趣。)
• 普通句: He is a teacher. He is very kind to us.
• 高分句: He is a teacher who is very kind to us. (他是一位对我们非常友善的老师。)
• 高级用法: 使用 介词 + which/whom 结构
  • 普通句: The school is very beautiful. I study in it.
  • 高分句: The school in which I study is very beautiful. (我所在的学校非常美丽。)

"状语从句" - 衔接流畅，逻辑缜密

让句子之间的逻辑关系更明确,文章结构更清晰。

• 时间状语从句 (when, while, as, not until...)

• 原因状语从句 (because, since, as, now that...)

• 条件状语从句 (if, unless, as long as...)

• 让步状语从句 (although, though, even though, no matter...)

• 目的状语从句 (so that, in order that...)

• 普通句: He was very tired. He still finished the work.

• 高分句: Although he was very tired, he still finished the work. (尽管他很累，他还是完成了工作。)

• 普通句: We must protect the environment. Otherwise, we will be punished by nature.

• 高分句: Only by protecting the environment can we avoid being punished by nature. (只有通过保护环境，我们才能避免受到自然的惩罚。)

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万能过渡词与短语 (The "Transitional Phrases" Toolkit)

好的过渡词就像文章的“润滑剂”，能让段落和句子之间的衔接自然流畅，逻辑层次分明。

功能分类	词汇/短语	示例
开头/引出话题	As is vividly depicted in the picture... / It is universally acknowledged that... / When it comes to...	As is vividly depicted in the picture, an old man is teaching a young man how to use a smartphone. (如图生动描绘的那样，一位老人正在教一位年轻人如何使用智能手机。)
表示观点	From my perspective... / As far as I am concerned... / It is my firm belief that...	From my perspective, technology should serve as a bridge connecting different generations. (在我看来，技术应成为连接不同代际的桥梁。)
表示转折	However / Nevertheless / Nonetheless / On the contrary / While...	However, we should also be aware of the potential negative effects of technology. (我们也应意识到技术潜在的负面影响。)
表示递进/补充	Moreover / Furthermore / In addition / Besides / What's more	Moreover, communication is a two-way street that requires patience from both sides. (沟通是双向的，需要双方的耐心。)
表示因果	As a result / Consequently / Therefore / Thus / Owing to / Due to	As a result, a generation gap is likely to be widened if we fail to bridge it. (如果我们不能弥合代沟，它很可能会被拉大。)
表示举例 /	A case in point is... / For instance / For example	A case in point is that many elderly people feel lonely because their children are too busy to accompany them. (一个恰当的例子是，许多老人感到孤独，因为他们的子女太忙而没有时间陪伴他们。)
表示对比 /	On the one hand... on the other hand... / While... / Conversely	On the one hand, technology brings convenience; on the other hand, it may cause isolation. (技术带来了便利；它也可能导致孤立。)
得出结论	In conclusion / To sum up / All in all / From what has been discussed above...	In conclusion, we should make joint efforts to build a harmonious society where different generations can understand and support each other. (我们应该共同努力，建立一个不同代际能够相互理解和支持的和谐社会。)

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高分词汇替换 (The "Advanced Vocabulary" Swap List)

用更精确、更生动的词汇替换掉那些“陈词滥调”，是提升文章档次的关键。

普通词汇	高分替换词	适用场景
good	excellent, outstanding, marvelous, beneficial, positive	描述事物、品质、影响
bad	terrible, awful, harmful, negative, detrimental	描述事物、品质、影响
important	significant, crucial, vital, essential, indispensable	强调重要性
many/much	a host of, a multitude of, numerous, a sea of, a wealth of	表示数量多
think	believe, argue, maintain, hold the view that, be convinced that	表达观点
show	demonstrate, illustrate, reveal, indicate, manifest	表示展示、显示
help	assist, aid, support, contribute to, facilitate	表示帮助、促进
like	be fond of, be keen on, be passionate about, have a passion for	表示喜爱
problem	issue, dilemma, predicament, challenge	表示问题、困境
solve	tackle, address, resolve, cope with, figure out	表示解决、处理
get	acquire, obtain, gain, attain, achieve	表示获得、达到
big	enormous, tremendous, immense, significant, substantial	表示规模大、程度深

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实战演练 (Putting It All Together)

让我们用上面的技巧来改造一个简单的段落。

【原始段落】

Now, many students use their phones to play games. This is a bad habit. It wastes a lot of time. It is bad for their eyes. They should stop this.

【分析】

• 句式简单,全是简单句。
• 词汇重复,bad 出现两次。
• 逻辑生硬,句子之间没有很好的连接。

【高分版本】

As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student is indulged in playing games on his smartphone, which has become a prevalent phenomenon among the youth. From my perspective, this habit is detrimental to students in several aspects. First and foremost, it is a tremendous waste of precious time that could otherwise be devoted to academic pursuits or physical exercise. Furthermore, staring at the screen for extended periods inevitably exerts a negative impact on their eyesight. Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to address this issue. Only by striking a balance between entertainment and study can students make the most of their school life.

【高分解析】

1. 句式: 使用了 As is vividly depicted... (倒装/非谓语), ...which has become... (定语从句), From my perspective... (观点句), it is high time that... (虚拟语气), Only by... can... (倒装)。
2. 过渡: 使用了 First and foremost, Furthermore, Therefore, Only by... 等过渡词，逻辑清晰。
3. 词汇: prevalent phenomenon (普遍现象), detrimental (有害的), tremendous (巨大的), be devoted to (致力于), inevitably (不可避免地), address this issue (解决这个问题), strike a balance (取得平衡)。

最后的小贴士:

• 切忌堆砌: 不要为了用高级句型而用，确保用得准确、自然。
• 保证准确: 语法和拼写是基础，任何高级词汇和句型都不能弥补基础错误。
• 多读多背: 平时多阅读优秀的范文，积累地道的表达和句式。
• 动手练习: 每周至少写一篇作文，并尝试使用以上技巧进行修改。

祝你高考英语取得优异成绩！