八年级上册英语第四单元作文怎么写?
作文示例 2025年11月29日 23:24:51 99ANYc3cd6
下面我将为你提供一份全面的写作指南,包括:
- 核心词汇与短语
- 核心句型(一般过去时)
- 写作结构与思路
- 范文示例(不同水平)
- 写作小贴士
核心词汇与短语
掌握这些词汇是写好作文的基础。

动词过去式
was/were(是)went(去)visited(参观)watched(观看)played(玩;打)cleaned(打扫)studied(学习)did(做)had(有;吃)saw(看见)ate(吃)took(拍;拿)bought(买)rode(骑)swam(游泳)slept(睡觉)
描述性词语
interesting(有趣的)boring(无聊的)fun(有趣的)relaxing(令人放松的)terrible(糟糕的)awful(可怕的)great(很棒的)wonderful(精彩的)exciting(令人兴奋的)
常用短语
on vacation(在度假)go to the beach(去海滩)visit a museum(参观博物馆)in the mountains(在山里)walk around(四处闲逛)buy something(买些东西)take some photos(拍些照片)have a good time/enjoy myself(玩得开心)with my family(和我的家人一起)last weekend / last summer vacation(上个周末 / 去年暑假)
核心句型(一般过去时)
一般过去时的核心结构是 主语 + 动词的过去式 + 其他。

肯定句
- I
wentto the park yesterday. - She
visitedher grandparents last week. - They
playedbasketball two hours ago.
否定句
- I
didn't goto the park yesterday. (did not) - She
didn't visither grandparents last week. - They
didn't playbasketball.
一般疑问句
Didyougoto the park yesterday?Didshevisither grandparents?- 肯定回答: Yes, I did. / Yes, she did.
- 否定回答: No, I didn't. / No, she didn't.
特殊疑问句
What didyoudolast weekend?Where didhegoon vacation?How wasyour vacation?Did youhavea good time?
写作结构与思路
一篇关于“过去经历”的短文,可以遵循“总-分-总”的结构。
结构:开头 → 主体 → 结尾
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开头(第一段):点明时间,总述活动
- 直接说明你要写的时间,比如上个周末、上个月或去年暑假。
- 用一句话概括一下你过得怎么样(好、坏、有趣等)。
- 句式: "Last weekend / Last summer vacation, I..." / "How was my weekend? It was..."
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主体(第二段/第三段):具体描述事件(2-3件事)
- 这是文章的核心,需要详细描述你做了什么。
- 按时间顺序或逻辑顺序来写,先写上午,再写下午;或者写一件事,再写另一件。
- 对每件事进行简单描述:在哪里?和谁一起?做了什么?感觉如何?
- 句式: "On Saturday morning, I... It was..." / "In the afternoon, my family and I... We felt..."
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最后一段):总结感受
- 总结一下整个经历给你留下的印象。
- 表达你的感受,我很开心”、“很累但很值得”等。
- 可以对下一次活动做个简单的展望。
- 句式: "All in all, it was a wonderful day." / "I was tired, but I really enjoyed it. I hope I can do it again."
范文示例
这里提供两个不同水平的范文,你可以根据自己的情况参考。
范文1:基础版(词汇和句式相对简单)
A Busy Weekend
Last weekend was very busy but fun. On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. It was a little tiring, but my room was very clean. In the afternoon, I went to the library with my friend, Lily. We studied for the English test. It was useful.
On Sunday, I visited my grandparents. They were very happy to see me. My grandma cooked a big, delicious lunch for me. We talked and watched TV together in the evening.
I was tired on Sunday night, but I had a good time. I love my busy weekend!
范文2:进阶版(词汇更丰富,句式更多样)
An Unforgettable Summer Vacation
What did I do last summer vacation? It was an unforgettable and exciting trip. I went to Beijing with my parents for five days.
The first day, we arrived in Beijing and went to the Great Wall. Wow, it was amazing and magnificent! We walked on the wall for a long time and took many photos. I felt so proud. On the second and third days, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. They were both very grand and interesting. I learned a lot about Chinese history.
We also tried some delicious food, like Peking Duck. It was so tasty! Every evening, we walked around the busy streets and enjoyed the beautiful night view.
It was a wonderful vacation. I not only saw many famous places but also learned a lot. I hope I can visit Beijing again soon!
写作小贴士
- 先列提纲:动笔前,先用中文或简单的英文列出你要写的几个要点,这样文章结构会更清晰。
- 时态要统一:全文主要使用一般过去时,注意动词要使用过去式形式。
- 善用连接词:使用
First,Then,Next,After that,Finally等词,让文章更有条理。 - 写完后检查:
- 拼写:有没有拼错的单词?
- 语法:动词的过去式对不对?主语和动词在人称和数上是否一致?
- 标点:句号、逗号用对了吗?
- 句子是否通顺?有没有把事情说清楚?
希望这份详细的指南能帮助你写出一篇优秀的英语作文!加油!