八年级上册英语第一单元作文怎么写?
作文示例 2025年11月29日 23:18:26 99ANYc3cd6
下面我将为你提供一个全面的写作指南,包括:
- 写作主题与思路
- 核心词汇与短语
- 万能句型与结构
- 高分范文(三个不同版本)
- 写作小贴士
写作主题与思路
本单元的作文通常要求你写一篇关于“一次难忘的经历”或“上个周末/假期”的记叙文。

基本思路:
- 开头: 点明时间、地点和事件,上个周末,我和家人去……。
- 中间: 详细描述事情的经过,这是文章的主体部分,要使用一般过去时,可以按照时间顺序来写:
- 我们做了什么?(What did we do?)
- 看到了什么?(What did we see?)
- 感觉如何?(How did I feel?)
- 发生了什么特别的事情?(What happened?)
- 总结这次经历,说明为什么它难忘,或者你从中得到了什么。
核心词汇与短语
动词 (重点记忆不规则动词过去式):
go->went(去)see->saw(看见)visit->visited(参观)watch->watched(观看)play->played(玩)eat->ate(吃)drink->drank(喝)buy->bought(买)have->had(有,进行)get->got(得到)take->took(拍照片,带)feel->felt(感觉)is/are->were(是)do/does->did(做)
名词:
weekend(周末),holiday(假期),vacation(假期)park(公园),zoo(动物园),museum(博物馆),beach(海滩)movie(电影),restaurant(餐厅)friend(朋友),family(家人),classmate(同学)photo(照片),gift(礼物)
形容词:

interesting(有趣的),boring(无聊的),great(很棒的),wonderful(精彩的)happy(开心的),excited(兴奋的),tired(累的),relaxed(放松的)beautiful(美丽的),big(大的),small(小的)
副词:
yesterday(昨天),last weekend/week/month(上个周末/星期/月)first(,then(,next(,finally(very much(非常)
常用短语:
go shopping(去购物)go fishing(去钓鱼)go hiking(去远足)take some photos(拍一些照片)buy something for...(为某人买某物)have a good time(玩得开心)be interested in...(对……感兴趣)feel happy/excited(感到开心/兴奋)
万能句型与结构
开头句型:
Last weekend / Last Sunday, I went to... with my family/friends.(上个周末/上周日,我和我的家人/朋友去了……。)I had a great / wonderful / unforgettable holiday.(我度过了一个很棒/精彩/难忘的假期。)It was a/an [形容词] day for me.(这是……的一天。)
中间发展句型 (按时间顺序):

- First, we... (我们……。)
First, we visited the museum.(我们参观了博物馆。)First, we had breakfast at a restaurant.(我们在一家餐厅吃了早餐。)
- Then, we... (我们……。)
Then, we watched a movie.(我们看了一场电影。)Then, I took many photos there.(我在那儿拍了很多照片。)
- After that, we... (之后,我们……。)
After that, we went shopping.(之后,我们去购物了。)After that, we felt a little tired.(之后,我们感觉有点累。)
- Finally, we... (我们……。)
Finally, we went home by bus.(我们坐公交车回家了。)Finally, we had a big dinner.(我们吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。)
描述感受的句型:
I felt very happy/excited.(我感到非常开心/兴奋。)It was very interesting.(它非常有趣。)I was tired but happy.(我很累,但很开心。)
结尾句型:
I had a really good time.(我玩得真的很开心。)It was an unforgettable experience for me.(这对我来说是一次难忘的经历。)I hope I can go there again.(我希望我能再去一次。)
高分范文
这里提供三个不同难度和侧重点的范文,你可以根据自己的水平选择和参考。
基础版 (上个周末去公园)
A Wonderful Weekend
Last Sunday was a beautiful day. My family and I went to the park near our home.
First, we walked to the park. The sun was shining and the birds were singing. We felt very happy. Then, we sat on the grass and had a picnic. My mother prepared some delicious food, like sandwiches and fruit. Next, my father and I played badminton. We had a lot of fun. Finally, we took a walk and enjoyed the flowers. We took some photos, too.
In the evening, we went back home. I was a little tired, but I had a wonderful time with my family. I love my family!
进阶版 (去动物园)
A Trip to the Zoo
Last Saturday, I went to the zoo with my best friend, Tom. We were very excited because we love animals.
When we arrived at the zoo, we saw a big sign. First, we went to see the pandas. They were so cute! They were eating bamboo quietly. Then, we watched the monkeys. They were running around and making funny noises. It was really interesting. After that, we saw the lions and tigers. They were sleeping, but they still looked very strong. Finally, we watched a dolphin show. The dolphins were very smart. They jumped through the rings and played with balls. Everyone clapped for them.
We stayed in the zoo for the whole day. We took many photos and bought some souvenirs. We were tired, but we had a great time. It was an unforgettable trip.
高分版 (去海边度假)
An Unforgettable Holiday
Last summer vacation, my family and I went to the beach for a holiday. It was one of the best holidays I have ever had.
We drove to the beach on a sunny morning. The blue sea and the golden sand were so beautiful. I couldn't wait to get into the water. First, we swam in the sea. The water was cool and felt great. Then, my father and I built a big sandcastle on the beach. It was a lot of work, but we were very proud of it. My mother was just relaxing on the sand and reading a book. In the afternoon, we tried some fresh seafood at a small restaurant near the beach. It was delicious! Later, we watched the sunset. The sky turned orange and pink. It was the most beautiful sunset I had ever seen.
That day, I felt very relaxed and happy. Being with my family and enjoying the beauty of nature made me feel so good. This holiday taught me to appreciate the simple things in life. I will never forget this wonderful experience.
写作小贴士
- 时态是关键: 全文主要使用一般过去时,写完后,检查一下你的动词是不是都用对了过去式形式,特别是那些不规则动词。
- 善用连接词: 使用
First,Then,Next,Finally,After that等词语,让你的文章