中考英语作文怎么写？
作文示例 2025年12月12日 10:42:03 99ANYc3cd6
中考英语作文核心要点
中考英语作文通常是应用文或话题作文，要求在80-100词左右，想拿到高分，必须抓住以下几个关键点：
审题要准
- 看清文体：是书信、邮件、通知、日记，还是记叙文、议论文？
- 明确要点：题目通常会给出几个要点，一个都不能漏。
- 确定人称和时态：比如日记用第一人称和过去时；通知用第三人称和将来时/祈使句。
结构要清 一篇高分作文就像盖房子，要有清晰的结构：
- 开头：点明主题，引出下文，1-2句话即可。
- 围绕要点展开,分1-2段，每段有一个中心思想，用 "Firstly, / Secondly, / Besides," 等词连接。
- 总结观点,表达祝愿或提出建议，1-2句话。
语言要“亮”
- 词汇升级：避免重复使用简单词，用
good->excellent,great,wonderful；用like->enjoy,love,be fond of。 - 句式多样：不要总是用 "I like..." "I think..." 开头，尝试使用：
- 简单句：I love my school.
- 并列句：I love my school, and the teachers are very kind.
- 复合句：I love my school which has a beautiful garden.
- 倒装句（高级）：Not only does our school have a beautiful garden, but it also has a great library.
- 语法正确：这是底线！注意主谓一致、时态、单复数等。
卷面要整洁
- 字迹工整：给阅卷老师留下好印象。
- 分段清晰：开头、正文、结尾分明。
- 无涂改：尽量避免划掉重写，保持卷面干净。
高分范文示例
我们以两个最常见的题型为例：书信和话题记叙文。
范文1：书信类
假设：** 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的传统节日——春节，并说明你喜欢它的原因。
范文：
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese traditional festivals. My favorite one is the Spring Festival, which is the most important festival in China.
There are several reasons why I love it the most. Firstly, it's a time for family reunion. No matter how far away we are, all family members get together to have a big dinner on New Year's Eve. Secondly, we can enjoy delicious food like dumplings and fish. Besides, children are always the happiest because they can receive lucky money in red envelopes from their elders.
I really hope you can experience the Spring Festival with me one day. It's full of joy and warmth!
Best wishes, Li Hua
【点评】
- 结构清晰：开头点明主题，正文用 "Firstly, Secondly, Besides" 分三点阐述原因，结尾表达祝愿。
- 词汇亮点：
traditional festivals,family reunion,get together,delicious food,lucky money,red envelopes,joy and warmth。 - 句式多样：使用了
which引导的定语从句，以及There are...句型。
范文2：话题记叙文
假设：** 请以 "An Unforgettable Experience" 为题，写一篇短文，描述一次让你难忘的经历，内容包括：时间、地点、事件和你的感受。
范文：
An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer vacation, I had an unforgettable experience that taught me a valuable lesson.
It was a sunny Saturday. I went to the park to fly a kite with my best friend, Lily. Suddenly, a strong wind blew, and my favorite kite, a colorful dragon, got caught in a tall tree. I felt very worried and tried my best to get it down, but it was too high. Just then, an old man saw us. He smiled and said, "Don't worry. I can help you." With a long stick, he carefully knocked the kite down.
I was so grateful and thanked him again and again. This experience made me realize that helping others is not only a happy thing but also makes our world warmer. It is truly unforgettable.
【点评】
- 要素齐全：时间 (
Last summer vacation)、地点 (in the park)、事件 (kite got caught in a tree) 和感受 (worried,grateful,unforgettable) 都包含在内。 - 叙事流畅：按照“起因-经过-结果-感悟”的顺序展开，逻辑清晰。
- 词汇和句式：
unforgettable experience,valuable lesson,a colorful dragon,got caught in,tried my best,With a long stick...等表达使文章更生动。
万能句型和亮点词汇
开头句
- I'm writing to tell you about... (写信)
- It's great to hear from you. (回信)
- There is no doubt that... is very important. (议论)
- I will never forget the day when... (记叙)
过渡词
- 表示并列/递进:
Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly,Besides,What's more,In addition,Not only... but also... - 表示转折:
However,But,On the contrary - 表示因果:
Because of...,As a result,Therefore,So - 表示总结:
In conclusion,In a word,To sum up
结尾句
- I hope you can... (表达希望)
- Looking forward to your reply. (写信)
- It's really a meaningful/exciting/unforgettable experience. (总结感受)
- We should learn to... (提出建议)
亮点词汇
- 好的:
excellent,wonderful,amazing,fantastic,marvelous - 喜欢:
enjoy,love,be fond of,be crazy about - 帮助:
help,assist,support,give a hand to - 重要:
important,essential,significant,vital - 美丽的:
beautiful,pretty,lovely,attractive,gorgeous - 高兴的:
happy,glad,pleased,delighted,excited
备考建议
- 背诵范文：不是死记硬背，而是学习范文的结构、亮点词汇和句式，并尝试模仿。
- 整理自己的模板：针对书信、日记、通知等不同文体，整理出属于自己的开头、结尾和常用句型模板。
- 坚持练笔：每周至少写一篇作文，可以找老师或同学批改，找出自己的问题并改正。
- 积累素材：准备一个“好词好句本”，平时阅读时遇到的好表达随时记录下来。
保持自信,沉着应考，祝你中考顺利，金榜题名！
