第一次写英语作文,该从何下笔?
作文示例 2025年12月14日 16:22:37 99ANYc3cd6
“第一次”的经历是每个人成长中非常宝贵的一部分,也是英语作文中一个很棒的题目,它通常包含情感、挑战和收获,很容易写出真情实感。
下面我为你提供一个完整的写作指南,包括写作思路、常用词汇和句型、一篇范文,以及一些不同主题的“第一次”题目供你选择。

第一步:写作思路 (How to Structure Your Essay)
一篇好的记叙文(讲述故事的文章)通常遵循一个简单的结构:
开头 - 介绍
- 点明主题: 直接说出你要写的“第一次”是什么。"The first time I stood on a stage..." (我第一次站在舞台上……)
- 设置背景: 简单介绍一下当时的情况。"It was a school talent show, and I was only ten years old." (那是一场学校的才艺表演,我当时只有十岁。)
- 表达心情: 用一两个词概括你当时的心情,nervous (紧张), excited (兴奋), scared (害怕)。
主体 - 发展 这是文章最重要的部分,要详细描述过程,可以按照时间顺序来写:
- 事件起因: 为什么会有这次“第一次”?"My teacher encouraged me to join, even though I was terrified of public speaking." (我的老师鼓励我参加,尽管我非常害怕公开演讲。)
- 过程与挑战: 详细描述你遇到了什么困难,你的感受是怎样的,这里要多用细节!
- 感官描写: 你看到了什么?听到了什么?感觉如何?(手心出汗、心跳加速、声音颤抖等)
- 心理活动: 你当时在想什么?“我能行吗?”“如果搞砸了怎么办?”
- 转折点: 是什么让你坚持下来的?可能是朋友的鼓励、老师的眼神,或者你自己的决心。
- 总结与感悟

- 事件结果: 最后发生了什么?"When the applause started, I forgot all my fear." (当掌声响起时,我忘记了所有的恐惧。)
- 你的收获与感悟: 这是最关键的部分!这次经历教会了你什么?它对你有什么长远的影响?
- "I learned that courage isn't the absence of fear, but the action in spite of it." (我学到了,勇气不是没有恐惧,而是带着恐惧依然行动。)
- "This experience made me a more confident person." (这次经历让我成为一个更自信的人。)
第二步:常用词汇与句型 (Useful Words & Sentence Patterns)
描述心情:
- Nervous / Anxious: 紧张的
- Excited: 兴奋的
- Scared / Terrified / Frightened: 害怕的
- Worried / Concerned: 担心的
- Confident: 自信的
- Proud: 自豪的
- Relieved: 松了一口气的
描述动作与感受:
- My heart was pounding/racing. 我的心怦怦直跳。
- My hands were shaking/sweating. 我的手在发抖/出汗。
- I took a deep breath. 我深吸了一口气。
- I could feel my face turning red. 我能感觉到我的脸变红了。
- My mind went blank. 我的脑子一片空白。
- A wave of confidence washed over me. 一股自信感涌上心头。
连接词:
- At first... 起初……
- Then... …
- Suddenly... 突然……
- As time went by... 随着时间推移……
- In the end... / Finally... …
- What's more... …
- As a result... 结果……
第三步:范文示例 (Sample Essay)
这里以一个非常经典的主题为例:第一次公开演讲。 My First Public Speech**

The memory of my first public speech is still vivid in my mind, not for the success, but for the intense nervousness I felt. It was a defining moment that taught me more about myself than any book ever could.
It happened in my fifth-grade English class. Our teacher announced that everyone had to give a two-minute speech about their favorite hobby. When she said my name, my stomach dropped. I was a shy kid who hated being the center of attention. For days, I was a bundle of nerves. I practiced my speech in front of my mirror, in front of my dog, and even in my head, but my voice always trembled. The night before, I could barely sleep.
Finally, the day arrived. As my name was called, I felt a cold sweat break out on my forehead. I walked to the front of the class, my legs feeling like jelly. I looked out at my classmates and saw their curious faces, and my mind went completely blank. I forgot my opening lines. For a terrifying moment, I just stood there, silent. Then, I saw my teacher in the back. She gave me a small, encouraging smile. It was all I needed. I took a deep breath, closed my eyes for a second, and started again. My voice was still a little shaky, but I managed to finish my speech.
When I finished, there was a moment of silence, and then my classmates started to clap. It wasn't a loud applause, but it was warm and genuine. I felt a huge sense of relief and pride wash over me. I had done it.
That experience taught me a valuable lesson: courage is not about being fearless; it's about facing your fears and doing it anyway. It opened a door for me, and I gradually became more confident in speaking up, not just in class, but in all aspects of my life. It was a small step for me that day, but a giant leap for my confidence.
第四步:更多“第一次”题目供你选择
你可以选择任何一个你真正有感触的经历来写:
- The first time I rode a bicycle. (我第一次骑自行车)
- The first time I cooked a meal for my family. (我第一次为家人做饭)
- The first time I traveled alone. (我第一次独自旅行)
- The first time I said "I love you" to my parents. (我第一次对父母说“我爱你”)
- The first time I failed at something important. (我第一次在重要的事情上失败)
- The first time I made a new friend. (我第一次交到新朋友)
- The first time I saw the ocean. (我第一次看到大海)
- The first time I took care of a pet. (我第一次照顾宠物)
写作小贴士:
- 写你真正知道的: 选择一个你印象深刻的“第一次”,这样你才有话可说,情感也最真实。
- 多用细节: 不要只说“我很紧张”,要描述“我的手心在冒汗,心跳得像打鼓一样”。
- 大胆写,再修改: 第一稿不用追求完美,先把故事写出来,然后再慢慢修改语法和用词。
祝你写作顺利!如果你写完之后,可以发给我看看,我很乐意帮你提一些修改建议。