九年级英语期末作文
作文示例 2026年1月17日 11:04:55 99ANYc3cd6
九年级英语高分作文结构（万能公式）
一篇优秀的英语作文,结构清晰是关键，建议采用经典的“三段式”结构。
第一段：引言 - 开门见山，点明主旨
- 任务： 引入话题，表明你的观点或态度。
- 写法：
- 背景引入： 用一两句概括性的话引出话题。
- 明确观点： 清晰地表达你的看法或文章将要讨论的核心内容。
- 常用句型：
Nowadays, ... has become a hot topic.(……已成为一个热门话题。)With the development of society, ... is playing an increasingly important role in our lives.(随着社会的发展，……在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。)As a ninth-grade student, I strongly believe that...(作为一名九年级学生，我坚信……)There is no denying that...(不可否认的是……)
第二段：主体 - 论证观点，详述理由
- 任务： 这是文章的核心，需要用2-3个理由来支撑你的观点。
- 写法：
- 主题句： 每段开头用一句话概括本段的核心理由。
- 举例/解释： 围绕主题句进行具体的解释、举例或阐述。
- 连接词： 使用恰当的连接词，使段落逻辑清晰。
- 常用连接词：
- Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly... (其次，第三……)
- In the first place, In the second place... (其次……)
- What's more, Moreover, Besides... (而且，除……之外)
- For example, For instance... (比如……)
- As a result, Therefore... (所以……)
第三段：- 总结全文，升华主题
- 任务： 总结观点，重申立场，并可以提出建议或展望未来。
- 写法：
- 重申观点： 用不同的方式再次表达你的核心观点。
- 总结理由： 简要回顾第二段的理由。
- 提出建议/展望： （可选）给出建议或对未来进行展望。
- 常用句型：
In conclusion, ...(……)To sum up, ...(……)All in all, ...(……)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...(从以上讨论中，我们可以得出结论……)It is high time that we took action to...(是我们采取行动去……的时候了。)
常见话题范文与解析
以下选择一个高频话题进行详细讲解。
话题：是否应该使用手机” (Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school?)
这是一个典型的议论文题目,要求你表达自己的观点并给出理由。
范文：Should Students Be Allowed to Use Mobile Phones at School?
(第一段：引言) Nowadays, mobile phones have become an indispensable part of our daily lives. However, whether students should be allowed to use them at school has sparked a heated debate. As a ninth-grade student, I hold the opinion that mobile phones should be banned from the campus.
(第二段：主体 - 论证观点) There are two main reasons for my view. Firstly, mobile phones can be a major distraction to students. Instead of focusing on the lessons, many students might be tempted to play games, send messages, or browse social media during class time. This will undoubtedly have a negative impact on their academic performance. Secondly, the use of mobile phones can lead to cyberbullying and other online safety issues. Without proper supervision, students might be exposed to inappropriate content or even become victims of online harassment, which is harmful to their mental health.
(第三段： In conclusion, although mobile phones are useful tools for communication, their potential harm to students' studies and safety on campus cannot be ignored. Therefore, I strongly believe that schools should prohibit students from using mobile phones during school hours to create a better learning environment.
范文解析
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结构清晰：
- 第一段： 用
Nowadays...引入手机普遍性，然后用However...转折到校园争议，最后用I hold the opinion that...明确给出“禁止使用”的观点。 - 第二段： 使用
Firstly... Secondly...清晰地列出两个理由：1. 影响学习；2. 带来网络安全问题，每个理由后都有具体的解释，如play games, send messages和cyberbullying, online harassment。 - 第三段： 用
In conclusion...开头，承认手机的优点 (useful tools)，但用However和cannot be ignored强调其危害，最后重申观点并提出建议 (prohibit... during school hours)。
- 第一段： 用
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词汇丰富：
indispensable(不可或缺的),sparked a heated debate(引发了激烈的讨论),hold the opinion(持有观点),prohibit(禁止) 等词汇比常见的important,discuss,think,ban更显高级。distraction(分心),academic performance(学业表现),cyberbullying(网络欺凌),harassment(骚扰),mental health(心理健康) 等词汇准确且切题。
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句式多样：
- 简单句：
Mobile phones have become part of our lives. - 复合句：
Instead of focusing on the lessons, many students might be tempted to play games...(使用了instead of引导的状语) - 从句：
...whether students should be allowed to use them at school has sparked a debate.(主语从句),...which is harmful to their mental health.(非限制性定语从句) - 被动语态：
Students should be allowed to.../mobile phones should be banned...(使语气更客观、正式)
- 简单句：
核心词汇与句型储备
环保类
- 词汇： protect the environment, environmental protection, pollution (air, water, noise), recycle, reuse, reduce, energy-saving, sustainable development, global warming, carbon footprint
- 句型：
- It's our duty to protect the environment.
- We should take immediate action to solve the environmental problems.
- Only by working together can we make a difference.
个人成长/友谊类
- 词汇： grow up, responsibility, independence, challenge, overcome, friendship, loyal, trustworthy, get along with, cherish
- 句型：
- Friendship is one of the most precious things in life.
- True friends will always stand by you no matter what happens.
- Growing up teaches us how to face difficulties bravely.
文化交流/传统节日类
- 词汇： culture, tradition, custom, heritage, festival, celebrate, inherit, spread, exchange, diversity
- 句型：
- Culture exchange helps us better understand different countries.
- It's important to pass down our traditional culture to the next generation.
- Festivals are a good time for family reunions.
学习方法/健康生活类
- 词汇： effective learning method, develop a good habit, physical and mental health, take regular exercise, a balanced diet, keep a positive attitude
- 句型：
- A healthy body is the foundation for success.
- We should learn to manage our time wisely.
- It is beneficial for us to read more books.
写作注意事项与备考建议
- 认真审题： 看清题目要求，是要求你同意、反对还是讨论利弊，不要跑题。
- 列提纲： 动笔前花2-3分钟列一个简单的提纲，明确每段写什么，这样文章结构会非常清晰。
- 字迹工整： 卷面整洁会给阅卷老师留下好印象。
- 避免语法错误： 注意主谓一致、时态、单复数等基础语法，宁可使用简单的正确句，也不要用复杂的错误句。
- 多读多背： 平时多积累范文中的好词好句，尝试模仿并运用到自己的写作中。
- 练习： 考前找几个不同的话题，按照“三段式”结构进行限时练习，提高写作速度和熟练度。
祝你期末考试取得优异的成绩！
